Kingdom Hearts False Dreams 2 (OOC & SU)

Yeah, all right.

 

It's best to show you what time compression does when it is used partially with these links.

YouTube - Final Fantasy VIII Time Compression
Time Compression - The Final Fantasy Wiki has more Final Fantasy information than Cid could research

 

How was Ultimecia's Time Compression stopped this time?

 

I have no idea.

 

That idea I have for myself. Even though Ultimecia was able to achieve Time Compression & become ruler of present & future, Time Compression was only was able to be used partially because of a source that stops her power from actually using the time spell to it's fullest. People can still fade away from time compression as past, present & future collides with one another but at a very slow pace.

 

Alright well iv looked through this OOC and the actual Rp, Overall things are fine. But in both the OOC and the RP there are some peace's which are borderline spam. Make sure that in your posts in the RP that they are more than two paragraphs long. Other than that good RPing.

 

Elaborate.. I don't quite get where you're coming from.

 

??? What do you mean borderline spam?

 

<.> What the hell happened to my template of Ultimecia? I'm updating my rp profile & someone went & deleted the post with my template of her.

 

Don't get steamed up Darko. If I can't figure out what happened to it, I just have to redo the template. I don't want to get in trouble for someone saying that I'm using a secret character & that I didn't make a profile for that character when I did so I just have to do that when I actually have the time for myself. -________- Oh yea. That post can be considered spamming so be careful what you say Darko.

 

Never mind. I send a pm to Moogle & Nozomi about this but I'll just hurry up & redo the template real quick.

Name: Sorceress Ultimecia
Age: ???
Gender: Female





"...Lowlifes...Shameless filthy wretches. How you celebrate my ascension with such joy. Hailing the very one whom you have condemned for generations. Have you no shame? What happened to the evil, ruthless sorceress from your fantasies? The cold-blooded tyrant that slaughtered countless men and destroyed many nations? Where is she now? She stands before your very eyes to become your new ruler."

Side/Abilities: Darkness. Has the powers of all the sorceress of every generations. Main spells is space & time. Is real strong in summonings. Can even use people as if they was her own summons & junction them. Can enter into people's mind.

Personality: A manipulative Sorceress, malevolent, wants to alter time & space, Ruthless, Violent, filled with hatred & suspicions.

Bio: After tricking Dakota, controlling Ina and achieving Time Compression, Ultimecia ended up being the ruler of the timeline. Still, the powers of Time Compression wasn't used fully. A few months have passed and she teamed up with Maleficent and the sorceresses from different eras to further her plans. She's still after Draco's master so that she can easily create a world of her own. No matter what, she will make sure that all existence will bow down to her will.

Theme: YouTube - Final Fantasy VIII - Edea's Parade - Soundtrack OST

 

Is it okay that I have Reo in the same spot as Dakota.

 

Draco Stood Back And Drew His Other Sword. He then Saw The Sorcerers Fly Swiftly By Him And Grab Dakota. Then The Sorceresses Were Blasted Out Of The Dojo, And Into A Tree. Draco Realizing Dakota Was Still In The Room Ran To Him, And Said, "Lets Get Out Of Here." Draco Looked Outside to see Reo Transform. Draco Thought To Himself, "Hmm...That's...." His Thoughts Were Interupted By Another explosion. Draco Turned And Said To Dakota, "We Need To Leave Now. I Don't Know how They Found This Place, But Now It's Comprimised." Draco ,Seeing That Dakota Was Standing, Ran Out The Doorway And Straight To The Forest...

I have a complaint on this on what I put in bold Draco. You didn't explain how the sorceresses was kicked out so that's really powerplaying.

 

Ok, I'm Sorry I Was Really Confused So I Put That There To Help My Paragraph. I'll Change It If You'd Like?

 

It's ok Draco. Your post wasn't the only one. I have a big problem about Reonardo's and how he did a tremendous part of powerplaying.

Reo wheeled his head around and shouted at Dakota holding out a hand. "Get out of here, they're trying to kill you!!!" Reo clenched his teeth and looked at the situation he got himself in. "Damn it, there are too many sorceresses here, I can't do anything here. Crap, I FEEL SO HELPLESS!!! AAAARGH!!!" Reo went into a sprinter's position and ran off, disappearing. After reappearing three sorceresses were blasted through a very sturdy tree that stood in the garden of the dojo. "Huff . . . huff, all right. T-time . . . TO EXPLODE!!!"

Reo moved again at blinding speed at another sorceress and got below her. He pushed out hard with his feet and flung out an extremely brutal uppercut, sending the sorceress flying into the air. Reo kicked out and up into the sorceress, breaking bones and inflicting excruciating pain. Reo then moved over her and punched down hard, sending her back down into the ground, making a small crater. Reo landed and gave a defiant look at the other sorceresses ready to attack him. "Man . . . I really didn't think I would have to do this so soon . . ." he said with small frown.

He began to furrow in his back pocket and took out a ball. The ball was the size of a small cherry, lustring with the brilliant colour of red. Reo popped it into to his mouth and bit into the very hard surface. Reo's body began to get slimmer and more leanly muscular. Suddenly, a powerful wave of qi burst around him, making his hair stand up in spikes going back. Reo grinned and pointed at the group of lackeys, "Yeah, now you start to get scared!"


The things I have underlined really shocked me. First off, you really need to use the sorceress' names Reonax since I'm in control of 20 characters.This includes for everyone else so it can make everything goes smoothly and get rid of confusions. Anyways, about the reappearing part, you really didn't tell how the three sorceresses (Which I assume is Cethari, Indari and Chandra) was blasted into a tree. There's also no way for you to break bones or bring terrible pain unless you did a super technique attack. Not only that, since Sorceresses uses a lot of magic and can airborne whenever they want to, it's real hard for one person to use close range attacks on someone who can use long range. Also, it's hard to actually say that you knock a character into the ground and make a small crater. It's best for you to keep on reading on my sorceress' template and the powers they possess. Cethari can use the powers of illusion so she can easily disguise as Ultimecia but she don't have Ultimecia's powers at all. Still funny how you try to have one small character take on ten witches because they can easily just surround you and take you out in one hit, which I really don't want.

It's best for you to hear this from me than to hear it from Moog, Kairu or any other mods. I'm making this as an example so you can know what mistakes you've made. Not mad but be very careful. Think straight about this. Having one character take on ten power characters means suicide. It means you're begging for them to just come back and annihilate your character from the very beginning. Even I have limits with my characters regardless of having so many characters. I can't have all ten of my characters just go on and attack everyone because that won't be good and I'll be breaking rules, which is why I'm making sorceresses taunt and tease people.