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Rift.

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics' started by Luxoran, Jan 3, 2010.

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  1. Jan 3, 2010 #1
    Luxoran

    Luxoran New Member

    The moment I found this section of the forum, well, well....
    Let's just say I need some new pants.

    Anyway, what you are about to see is me. Well, not really. You WILL be able to hear me, though. Yes yes, I know. Exciting.

    This is my only tangible vocal piece to date, and it isn't too big so don't expect any epic ballads or other things related to epic anything from me. *ramble*

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    YouTube - Oh yes. Yes yes yes.


    Somewhere along this rift
    I'll find what I've been looking for
    Somewhere along this line
    I'll see the light
    Again and again

    Somewhere along this stretch of sea
    I figure you'll come back to me
    And then the puzzle won't obscure my face
    Anymore
    I hope so

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    All vocals and lyrics done and written by Luxoran. Comment and criticize if you need to.
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  2. Jan 3, 2010 #2
    Overdose

    Overdose Ninja.V

    Your sir, are very talented.
     
  3. Jan 3, 2010 #3
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    WHEEEEE!! You get points from me!!! SING THE NEXT SONG PLEASE! A great talent of yours indeed!!
     
  4. Jan 3, 2010 #4
    Zero

    Zero ♫♪♫Dear☺God♫♪♫

    I liked it. :D
     
  5. Jan 5, 2010 #5
    Luxoran

    Luxoran New Member

    Thank you.
    Thank you.
    Annnnd thank you.
     
  6. Jan 5, 2010 #6
    Demyxx

    Demyxx New Member

    That was amazing!! ^^
     
  7. Feb 7, 2010 #7
    merlinosheep

    merlinosheep A.K.A The Leaver

    *sigh.* i know that in every showcase thread is one who dislikes/agrees. Why does it has to be me? T_T
    Sorry, it's not really my style i guess.. did you take vocal-lessons?
     
  8. Feb 7, 2010 #8
    Reonarudo Butsuchiru

    Reonarudo Butsuchiru Banned

    Wow, nice voice.
     
  9. Feb 7, 2010 #9
    Goldfish

    Goldfish Cats in the Cradle

    I'm with Merlin here. It's not good, it's not bad but I'm disliking it more than I'm liking it. It's like your mediocre Idol contestant.
    Instead of taking this the wrong way, I hope you'll see it as a reason to try and improve =]
    I'd like to hear more from you, to hear your improvements.
     
  10. Feb 8, 2010 #10
    Luxoran

    Luxoran New Member

    Upon a few more listens,
    I don't like it either. :/

    Hopefully I can blame this on something passive like a cold or a bad day. Or maybe I just suck, hehe. Either way, thank you for the critique. I'll be sure to punish myself with the methods most fitting on behalf of my shortcomings.
     
  11. Feb 8, 2010 #11
    merlinosheep

    merlinosheep A.K.A The Leaver

    Couldn't have said it better, dude.

    Good that you're taking it the right way =]
     
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