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"The Garden of Everything"

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Mythril Roxas, Aug 19, 2009.

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  1. Aug 19, 2009 #1
    Mythril Roxas

    Mythril Roxas New Member

    The Garden of Everything​





    "The One of freedom will rise from the darkness, were as the one of control will fall from the light. And so here we are, searching for the middle path...will we ever find the truth in our mysteries?"- Zoan​



    Zoan was the first great prophet of Truth.

    It has been 300 years since the birth of the prophesy. The great war that once ravaged the world. The wolves and the lions fought, the wolves under darkness, and the lions among light.

    The wolves were called Fenri, and the lions were called Solri.
    The wolves couldn't shift until night. They could move things with their minds, and they could speek with other animals.
    The lions could only shift in the day. They had great engineering minds, they used technology and tools more compaired to their nomadic adversaries. They could command fire and make ears bleed with their roars.
    But both the lions and the wolves could shift at dawn and twilight.


    What started the great war was a crossing. A Solri group of bandits went after the wolves when the wolves couldn't shift. During the day.
    The wolf government talked to the lions about this problem, but the lions wouldn't do anything. And so the wolves fought them all, the bandits and the lions.

    The war raged on for 12 years, neither side winning, both loosing. The Solri had greater numbers, but the wolves were greater fighters. Soon both races were nearing extinction. But then, when all else seemed to fade away like the dust, at the last dawn of the war a great warrior rose and settled the conflict by putting a great sea in the middle of the two races. The races rage was calmed, and a peace was forged as the great warrior dissappeared, leaving only his name and a prophesy. He was Zoan.




    ....300 years later.....


    .....A great calamity has struck the world. Earthquakes rage, hurricanes destroy. Some say power relics are the cause...that the great warrior Zoan left traces of power in these ancient relics called the "Zoa". The wolves are blaiming the lions for fooling with the Zoa, and the lions are blaiming the wolves. And a new war is a brewing...

    Now both races call for a savior...they call for Zoan...

    ___________________________________________________________________​



    Rezka roamed the loan streets of a small city that lied near the borders of the Solri and Fenri borders. It was the one city that Fenri and Solri got along, they cooapperated with one another, it was called Noavia. It lied at the Southern tip of the great sea, and it was the place said to have been the birth of Zoan's peace treaty.

    He saw them all working together, it brought tears to his eyes.


    "If...if only the rest of the world was like this place. This...this place....this place is the closest thing to heaven...."-Rezka.
    Rezka was there to find out some information on Zoan, he needed to further his research. He headed straight for the library. He was meeting a friend there.
     
  2. Aug 19, 2009 #2
    Yukie

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    "Great tragedy will happen soon." Natalia muttered to herself. As she close her eyes, she began to look into the future. "Things will be ruins, the people in fear, and the world will shatter." Projecting herself into the distant future, she began to scavenge the land. Looking for clues and knowledge on why the world will end this way.

    Shifting in her lioness form, she began to walk the earth. Sniffing for fellow brothers and sister. Upon reaching the summit, she stars into the horizon. The sun still setting but it was almost eerie. She felt a cool chill brush upon her. Continuing her search, she stumble upon her city. "Oh my." she thought to herself. The once beautiful city is now in ruins. Buildings crumble and the roads are in a rumble.

    Walking up the steps, she look into the distant. Nothing. Using her roar, she roar into the sky. Calling her brothers and sister. After a few more roars. She got an answer back. An answer she never wanted. It was a howl. Not just one but many. The howls echo into the shadows of the city. They became more louder, as night began to fall upon the city.

    Out of the darkness, there they step. It was the wolves. Fearing for her life, she shifted back into her human form. To late. The wolves began their attack. It was food.

    Snapping out from her vision. She grimace in pain as she look at her shoulder. Bite marks. "Damn."
     
  3. Aug 19, 2009 #3
    Mythril Roxas

    Mythril Roxas New Member

    Nius was roaming the halls in the castle.
    The Senate was pushing for a war, while the Priests voice was no where. They didnt send a represenative in the meeting, and their voice was needed. Nius decided to go to the top.

    The Senates plan was to split the army in three sections. Two of the sections would run across the edge of sea, while another would wait in the great walls of the city as reinforcements to which ever side needed help first.

    Nius proposed that a small band of warriors be sent to gather information on the Zoa and find them to solve these catostrophic problems.
    Nius believed that the wolves were inoscent, and the Senates finger being pointed at them was based upon no true evidence, only prejudice.

    Nius neared Natalia's room. She was the head of the Priests anyways, Nius wished to go straight to the top for advice.

    As he got next to the door he could hear her talking to someone. He opened the door.
    No one was there.
    "Talking to yourself again little miss Natalia?"-Nius
     
  4. Aug 19, 2009 #4
    Yukie

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    "I wish it was that simple." Natalia smiled. "Hey, can you hand me that towel." Dropping her cape, she began to expose the wound. "Not bad." She thought to herself. Trying to get a better view of her scar, she began to remove her top. She wasn't shy. Nor afraid that a man was there. She was fearless, like her mother.

    "Damn." The mark was huge. She can see in detail the bite mark of a wolf. That was one of the risk she has to go through. In order to see the future, she must project her present self into the future.

    "So, let me guess, why you are here? The Senate?" Natalia smiled. She was able to read people from an early age, that is why she is the High Priestess.
     
  5. Aug 19, 2009 #5
    Mythril Roxas

    Mythril Roxas New Member

    "Haha, very good child. Yes... the church did not send an envoy during the council. I knew before hand that you were busy, but your "people" didn't do their jobs either. Now (hands her the towel) i need your opinion on the matter on which the council was called. Its the Zoa relics. The Senate believes we should go to war. I believe we should carefully investigate the Zoa, and not blame the wolves for somethng that isn't their fault. I need you to take a side, or give us a third option..."-Nius
     
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  6. Aug 20, 2009 #6
    merlinosheep

    merlinosheep A.K.A The Leaver

    Archibald slowly woke up from his hammock in the commander's private quarters. He yawned, stretched his arms, and got out of the hammock. He put on his chief armour and strapped on his giant broadsword to his back. Proudly walking out of the quarters, a dozen of servents started escorting him to the shaman's little outpost not far from the fenri fortress.
    "You can go now, i need to talk to him alone" Archibald said to the servants. He went into the small hut while sweeping away the curtain to see if someone was there. He saw a small man sitting there, in the middle of the hut with his back to Archibald.
    "Greetings, Naoman..." Archibald boldly said.
     
  7. Aug 20, 2009 #7
    Yukie

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    Natalia smiled. "My opinion doesn't count. When did it ever? As soon as the Senate has made their minds, there is no stopping them. They closed down my churches because I disagree with them. They told me the city needs money. Yeah. Bunch of bull shit, if you ask me."

    Getting the towel, she began to apply pressure to her wounds. "You know I had a vision right?" Natalia smiled with glee. "In my vision, we are extinct. We became the wolves meal." Using her magic powers, she summoned a stream of water, and splash it on her wound. After that, she call on the power of fire, to burn her wound into a crisp, sealing it.

    Putting her clothes back on, she walk towards Nius. "Be careful on what you decide, my fellow brother. It will be the defeat of the wolves or the extinction of the Solri. Do not send all of our armies at once, nor do do not send a little bit. Wolves are savages, and their style of fighting is dirty. So be careful."
     
  8. Aug 20, 2009 #8
    Mythril Roxas

    Mythril Roxas New Member

    "...Natalia. I know that the ideals of our people and the ideals of some of your friends in the church have warped your mind. But please, let me assure you, the wolves are our friends. There is something that my lineage has hidden from our race, a secret truth that my father's father didn't even want the church to know. Something that would change the views of the world. But you have much to learn before I tell you of any secrets."-Nius
    Nius turned away as Natalia got dressed.

    "Natalia, your views are still held in power through me and through the people. The Senate's voice is second to only your's when it comes to the people. Make them desire no war, make them desire peace through out all nations, through out all races, in the present and the future..."-Nius
     
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  9. Aug 21, 2009 #9
    Yukie

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    "And what if I am right? What if I am right about the wolves? They are a savage race and needs to be put under supervision." Natalia smiled. She had power. Her voice can easy sway the people to believe her. She has more power than the Senate, but she doesn't want to abuse her powers. She wants to help people, but she can't stand hard headed people like Nius.

    "Dear, Nius. I am hope you are right. But if you are wrong then the countless lives of our mothers, fathers, brothers, and sisters, shall be your nightmare. You shall be haunt by their cries of help, their agonizing pain, and their bloodlust for revenge." Natalia said with firm.

    "I will talk to the Senate for no war."
     
  10. Aug 21, 2009 #10
    Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    In the minuscule, yet proficiently sized hut, Naoman Siiji sat poised in a meditative state, as was so often his custom in days of tension. Legs crossed over one another, his hands pressed hard against each other in front of his chest, and his mouth miming an ancient prayer. A small flame burnt lightly in front of him, and his face received the fullest blow of the smoke rising up. In this state, he had long found himself able to feel much of what was around him, though he admitted to others that it was really just his wolf instinct that kicked in. None the less, when Archibald entered the hut, he had known taht he had arrived, even with his back turned.

    "Welcome, Archibald," he said in a low, somewhat raspy tone, still with his back turned. "And do the doves fly strong for you on this day?"
     
  11. Aug 21, 2009 #11
    Mythril Roxas

    Mythril Roxas New Member

    Nius smiled at Natalia even though he sensed her troublesome heart.
    "I am grateful to you. I will leave you now. If there is anything I can do for you, please, let me know."-Nius

    Nius walked out of the room, and on his way out, he saw Riff walking towards him.
    "Son?"-Nius
    "..Father. Were you just speeking with Natalia?"-Riff
    "...yes...were are you going?"-Nius
    "To speek with her myself. I received a message from the Senate on today's council. We need to hear her voice in this matter."-Riff
    "That is what i spoke with her about. She desires no war."-Nius
    "Then she takes action against the Senate?"-Riff
    "Riff, people can disagree. it is common, for we are all made different."-Nius
    "Father......."-Riff
    Riff sounded a low growl in his throat. But it sounded as if he was trying to hold it back.
    "Yes son?"-Nius
    "....i desire...no...war....as well...."-Riff
    Riff walked past him and entered Natalia's room.
    Nius walked away.

    _________________________________________



    Rezka entered the library, and saw his old friend. He began to read the ancient books in the library about Zoan.
    How he appeared out of nowhere, lived among the two races for 33 years, then disappeared, leaving only the prophesy.

    There was a legend that was left though. A hidden prophesy left by Zoan to be found by a Solri named Cagnius (Nius's father).
    It stated that Zoan left pieces of his power in ancient relics called the Zoa. Each of the Zoa had the power to change the world in different ways. But they were to be left alone until Zoan returns, for if they were meddled with, the world would slowly be destroyed.

    "Hmmm....."-Rezka

    Rezka heard something crash.
    He closed the book and ran outside.

    He couldn't believe his eyes.
    A Solri gang had sent the whole peaceful village in flames. The fire raged on, killing Fenri and Solri both.
    Rezka could hear children screaming, burning alive.
    The Solri gang wore bandannas. Rezka ran to the children caught in fires and rescued them, taking them far away and out of the city.
    Then he heard more screams comming from the city.
    He ran back to find women being raped in the streets, and Fenri and Solri bodies lieing everywhere.
    One of the bandits caught sight of him.

    Rezka didnt see the bandit coming from the side.
    Rezka closed his eyes, then re-opened them. They were shining white.
    Rezka turned his hips and csent his claw straight through the bandit abut to attack him.
    the bandit went flying back with a hole in his stomach.

    Rezka, full of rage, sprinted towards all the bandits, slicing them into bits and pieces with a white aura around him.

    When he was finished, he howled at the moon.
    He transformed, and his eyes went blood red.

    _____________________________________________________

    Riff entered the room were Natalia was.

    "Priestess...I sent the bandits after the town. Now...what was in your last vision??"-Riff
     
  12. Aug 21, 2009 #12
    merlinosheep

    merlinosheep A.K.A The Leaver

    "That's what i'm here for, shaman..." Archibald said boldly. He tried to keep up his commander attitude, although he knew it wouldn't make a difference on the shaman. "Everynight the same dream huants me.
    A dream where all Fenri are extinct... Where the lands burn with mighty flames. And in the flames..."
    He stopped for a moment and walked in front of Nao-man. He boldly leaned down to the meditating man until their faces were close. With sad but mighty tone, he said:
    "I see the face of the solri prince, just laughing at our pain and agony!"
     
  13. Aug 21, 2009 #13
    Mythril Roxas

    Mythril Roxas New Member

    "One of freedom will rise from the darkness, and one of control will fall from light. One will fight for power, the other from wisdom. Will we ever solve the mysteries of our races? Only when the Sun and the Moon give birth to a new race will peace reach its climax..."-??
    Elro strode into the tent from the back.
    "Only when the Sun and the Moon give birth...to a new race..."-Elro
     
  14. Aug 21, 2009 #14
    merlinosheep

    merlinosheep A.K.A The Leaver

    "Tell me, shaman... " Archibald said while walking around the room.
    "You know something, don't you? Something you haven't informed me or anybody about yet.
    ... a silence occured...
    "Well? Speak up, ancient fenri."
     
  15. Aug 21, 2009 #15
    Mythril Roxas

    Mythril Roxas New Member

    Elro looked at Siiji, then back at the new warrior Archibald. He sensed something in Archibald, something unfamiliar. Then he began to walk out of the tent.
     
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  16. Aug 21, 2009 #16
    merlinosheep

    merlinosheep A.K.A The Leaver

    "o_O huh?" Archibald quickly drew his massive sword only to see an empty space where he could've sworn he sensed something. "That was... strange..." he claimed.
    "I could've sworn i sensed something..." he muttered to himself.
     
  17. Aug 21, 2009 #17
    Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    "Archibald!" said Siiji harshly, in an uncharacteristic, and rare tone of voice, opening his eyes. "Forget what you saw, and sit by me. For your dream is one that I am well aware of myself, for you see, I have been having the same one."
     
  18. Aug 21, 2009 #18
    Yukie

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    Natalia slapped Riff on the cheek. "How dare you come into my room and talk of things of that nature." Natalia cried. She was furious. "I told you to hold off the attack. I told you not to send the bandits in, we have to wait for the right conditions."

    Natalia began to walk towards her vanity. Sitting down, she began to chant into the mirror. "The Great Lion Spirit, tells me of great danger to our kingdom and to our race. We are on the brink of non existence." Natalia look at Riff. "I can't lose this kingdom. I...can't..lose you." Natalia cried out.

    "The Moon Celebration will happen next week. The Fenri, will be to busy pleasing their Gods and Goddess, that is the right time to move."
     
  19. Aug 21, 2009 #19
    Mythril Roxas

    Mythril Roxas New Member

    "Yes Lady Natalia. I have received reports that the attack was a success. The chaos of war is spreading. Those filthy wolves are blaiming the attack on us, and when the Senate hears of what has happened, they will surely create a way to twist it against my Father. Things are going according to plan....we will wait till the Fenri Celebratoin before unleashing our full on attack."-Riff

    Riff got closer to Natalia.

    "Do not worry, someday...we will rule this world. Just you and me...."-Riff


    ___________________________________________________________________


    Rezka transformed back into a human shift after hunting down the bandits.
    He went back to all the women and children he had saved. Most were Solri, a few of the young children were Fenri. They looked to him for guidance, for council, for protection.

    He sighed. One of the young boys began to cry for his mother, another young women tried to calm him down. The boy was a Fenri, the women was a Solri.

    "With such people in this world, how can the evil of chaos win?"-Rezka thought

    He jumped down from the high rock he was on.
    He knelt down to the crying child. The child stopped crying for a moment, and looked deep into Rezka's eyes.

    "We are all a family now. I need you to be strong. One day, you'll be the leader. Now please...you will get your revenge for what has happened this day my friend."-Rezka

    Rezka stood up now, looking at them all. There were about 30 of them. They all looked completely scared.

    "I will protect you, I will hunt these men down, and I will save our races. Put your faith in me, I will not lead you astray..."-Rezka
     
  20. Aug 22, 2009 #20
    Yukie

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    "Rule, this world?" Natalia raised her eyebrows, "You think I want world domination?" Natalia sighed. After all these years of getting to know each other, Natalia frown. "I want peace. I want to preserve of nation, and I want to preserve the memory of the Solri."

    Natalia got up from the vanity. She began to walk towards her balcony. Her view was magnificent. She smiled as she head laughter from the streets, the constant yelling of mother and child, and the chatter in the market. Playing with her hair, she began to talk softly in almost a whisper, "As a child, I was raise in complete solitude. Everyday, it was the same. Vigorous training with my mother, and after that, it was towards the library. Not once, I had a day to myself to reflect on the things I have done."

    She began to look up towards the sky. The blazing sun, turning dark orange was beginning to set, as she look onwards to see the birds fly back to their nest. "Not once, I had blame my mother for taking my child hood. Not once, I had complain that I wanted out. I just endure it. I endure everything. I endure for the people."

    Feeling the soft breeze brush against her skin, she turn to Riff, almost in a smile, she happily said, "I will gladly die for my people."
     
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