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The Order OOC/SU

Discussion in 'Archive' started by GrandShadow, Jul 31, 2009.

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  1. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    it would help but i'll settle for one more bad guy.
     
  2. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    well I like a bunch of peoplein a RP, not just a couple of people with alot of characters.
     
  3. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Yea. Stay online Shadow. Ill have my SU up in about 5 to 10 min
     
  4. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    I'm staying on, I have to see this.
     
  5. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    lol. Anticipation HG? lol. I dare not dissappoint. Gimme a sec
     
  6. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    i will, oh and CAP is accepted
     
  7. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    It's been a second, lol
     
  8. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Hold on bro, almost done. lol
     
  9. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    he types it up on word document or whatever then spell checks and everything. takes longer but thats why his ICs and SUs are so great
     
  10. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    You know me too well Shadow. lol. Thanks for the compliment. Anyways, heres my next SU, lemme know what you think.

    Name: Acer

    Gender: Male

    Alliance: Xenex Nejiru

    Appearance: Wears a full black comfort mesh heat-resistant latex suit at all times. Wears a deep red and black leather Ninja vest over it (Think like Scorpion from MK, with the Yellow areas being Black and red scaled)

    Biography: Acer was born a number of years ago... His true age and history is known to no one... Save for one man. His lifelong companion, whom he grew up with and has spent his entire life with is Xenex Nejiru, the recently appointed Leader of the Order. Since they were children, the two of them had always been together, watching eachothers backs, covering eachothers faults, and essentially, making eachothers lives better. They were like two halves of a whole being.

    While Xenex had been born to wealth, Acer had been born to poverty, being abandoned by his biological parents on the stairs of Nejiru Manor when he was 8 months old. In a way, as the two of them grew up, being nearly of the same age and build, they were much like brothers. And yet their bond was more than that. No matter what the other had gotten in trouble for, the other would defend them until their last breath.

    The two of them attended school together, and they there discovered their respective Ethos abilities. With Xenex being able to manipulate the light, and Acer being able to create it and manipulate heat, they were the most powerful tag-team ever seen. Completely unbeatable. Nothing could stop them when they were fighting together, and they honestly would not have it any other way.

    However... They eventually did go there separate ways. When Xenex was 26, he was recognized and accepted to become the leader of the Order. With Acer being of the lower class, he was not so easily accepted. But he refused to let himself be separated from the only thing he had ever known. He enlisted in the Order, and rose through the ranks in a magnificent fashion, many of the Sergeants and High Ranking officials meeting incidents which opened the position for Acer.

    Even though he rose through the ranks, he was constantly being pushed down, and many events which affected his life have scarred him permanently. When he was 28, one of his commanding officials got into an altercation with Acer... And the result was Acer getting his pupils burned out. His eyes are pure white now, the entire retina burnt out. Strangely, his vision was not diminished, only enhanced. He could now sense the heat in the air, which was essential to the functioning of his Ethos powers.

    While rising in the ranks, he met with many accidents and altercations with various officers. Due to his rough past and even rougher future, his personality became as fiery and violent as his Ethos powers. He studied every form of Martial Art, specializing in Shotokan and Bushido. He has been able to combine his Ethos powers with his Martial Arts to create his own new and fiery style, all whom have seen it have died.

    Eventually, Acer rose to the top, being ranked near the top of the most dangerous Ethix, second only to Xenex. As fate would have it, the two were reunited when Acer was assigned to be Xenex's personal bodyguard. The two had once again become the most powerful pair in the world. Nothing could touch them ever. Acer is now Xenex's most trusted personal assisstant and bodyguard. All of Acer's devotion, all his faith all his trust, all of it lays with Xenex, not with the Order.

    He would be more than happy to lay his life on the line for Nejiru any way he could, and he proves it every time he gets a chance.

    Personality: Acer's fiery personality is a reflection of his scarred past. He says few to no words to any other than Xenex. Any who challenge him end up begging for their lives within moments. His personality is more easily compared to an oil fire. Once it has begun to burn, the only thing that can stop his anger is himself.

    Powers: Able to perform every type of Martial Art known to the world. This includes Shotokan, Hapkido, Bushido, Jujitsu, Akido, ad Capoeira to name a few of his more special Arts. Able to speed up his molecules to move faster than normal beings. Able to land over 30 punches in 5 seconds. Complete control over all types of Fire. Not only able to manipulate and create it, but can actually intensify the heat within objects to boiling point and beyond. Highest temperature reached is 4000 Kelvin.
     
  11. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    and you know me to well, i was hoping for you to make a character like that.

    accepted, and i'll be making the thread in a few moments
     
  12. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    :D Thanks bro. I really do appreciate it.
     
  13. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    wow, I can almost see your guys whole profile on my screen
     
  14. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    lol. Key word is almost. :D:D:D

    What do ya think of it HG?
     
  15. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    you shoould have seen the su for the first rp we did together. it was at least twice as long.

    EDIT: the thread is up! The Order Official RP
     
    Last edited: Aug 5, 2009
  16. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    pretty sweet Storm, also I'm guessing you two know each other.
     
  17. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    not real life but from a couple other sites. we got our start RPing from the same rp and since then we've been in every RP started by the other and most of the rps one has joined, the other will. you'd swear we really knew each other but we don't. he's in florida and i'm in arizona, never met face-to-face
     
  18. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    well you fooled me into thinking you know each other in real life.
     
  19. Aqua Fresh

    Aqua Fresh Anita ✿◠‿◠

    Oh yes I will, I will today!! I am making the Bio right now...
     
  20. Legendseeker

    Legendseeker OPON Content Writer

    well, hurry it up. we made the RP already and we've started it up
     
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