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A Star Wars Story

Discussion in 'Archive' started by LatiJediLukeAndLeia, Jul 8, 2009.

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  1. LatiJediLukeAndLeia

    LatiJediLukeAndLeia New Member

    Story: Sarah Connor woke up in the planet of Coruscant one day. She and her son John Connor were found by Mace Windu and Yoda both were told that they were strong in the force and that they were to receive training. Sarah told them her name was Sarah Skywalker her son John said his name was John Reese.

    5 Years later

    John is now 15 years old and is receiving training under his mother. His mother had received the rank of Jedi Knight. There actual relationship is still a well kept secret from the council. A few months after John received his rank to Jedi Knight he turned to the Dark Side no one is sure why he did but Sarah is sure it has something to do with her. Order 66 is issued but Sarah was able to worn the council as well as some of the other Jedi in the temple so they could escape still a lot of Jedi were killed in the purge. Sarah manages to find her 15 year old son on Naboo and they fought nether winning the battle. John then attacks Sarah with a Force Push sending her unconscious. She is taken to one of Polis Massa hospitals for treatment. The doctors say that she is awake and healthy but she only has a 40% chance of survival the doctors can’t figure out why. She now only has a few more days before she can leave the hospital but whether she will make it that’s the real question. Sarah is hoping that her son can be convinced to come back to the Light Side.

    What happens during the rest of the story is up to you.

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    "Sarah I am more powerful than the chancier I can over through him than you and I can rule the galaxy and make things in this universe the way we want them to be." John replied to his old master.

    "John you've changed something you promised me you would never do." Sarah replied to her old Padawan.

    "Well promises aren't always kept are they." John said.

    "John please come back to the light were you belong." Sarah pleated with John.

    John ignored her pleating words "The John you know is dead, now fight me." John ordered.

    Sarah woke up looking around the hospital the only ones in the room were Sky and Kristen who were standing at her bedside just staring at her.

    "it's good to see that you are awake." said Sky.
     
  2. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    Jet was flying around on his ship, the crusader when all of a sudden he got a message from the outer rim planet, polis massa. "This is Jet, what do you want." A droid replied with a high pitched voice," We have a jedi in our care and need you to transport her off planet, before imperials capture her." Jet was already engaging the hyperdrive, before the droid could finish it's message."I'm on my way droid..."
     
    Last edited: Jul 10, 2009
  3. LatiJediLukeAndLeia

    LatiJediLukeAndLeia New Member

    "How are you feeling Sarah?" Kristen asked.

    "Not much better than I did yesterday." Sarah replied as she grabbed the pitcher and pored herself a glass of water.

    "Don't worry Sarah will find a way to bring John back to the Light Side of the Force." Kristen said in a hopeful voice.
     
  4. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    "WARNING! Imperial fleet is on way to polis massa." Jet thought to himself,This isn't good at all."Computer, set an encrpyted distress message on imperial channels, that looks like it's coming from space pirates on Anoth." lets hope that gets them. "Imperial fleet is spitting in two sir." great, my day just got a lot harder."Alright computer I need to make a call."
     
  5. LatiJediLukeAndLeia

    LatiJediLukeAndLeia New Member

    Sky was looking out the window of Sarah’s room he hadn't really said much since Sarah had woken up. Kristen was reading about different kinds of medicines from a halo disk that had been in Sarah’s room ever since she arrived at the hospital for treatment and Sarah had fallen asleep again after she had been served breakfast by one of the medical droids.
     
  6. Answer Man

    Answer Man Man I'm Awesome

    Nabo-

    Rina was walking in the desert with her hood covering her face, she was looking for her next bounty. She was trying to use the force to block the sand but it was too much. after 20 minutes she walked into town. She went into the pub and sat down. the bartender looked at her. "What do you wan little ladie?" said the bartender. "I'm looking for a bounty wall, do you have one?" "You don't look like a bounty hunter but yeah, it's over there." he said. She got up and walked over and saw a picture that caught her eye. The Sith wall, where some of the Siths that people wanted dead where. She picked up the one in front of her. " John Resse, he looks easy enough. Ohh 700,000, that's a lot of zeros. that much for one guy. But he's mine." and she walked out.
     
  7. LatiJediLukeAndLeia

    LatiJediLukeAndLeia New Member

    Sky was now sitting at Sarah's bedside "please get better soon Sarah." Sky thought. "Sky do you want me to go get the two of us some ice cream maybe it would take our minds off of what's been happing." Kristen said. Sky just looked up at her and nodded. Kristen walked out of the room.
     
  8. Answer Man

    Answer Man Man I'm Awesome

    Rina was asking questions trying to find out about John Resse. All she kept getting was that he was a bad sith, stronger than General Koda, but he's made a mess of the war. But one guy gave her a stright answer.

    "if your looking for info on John Resse, than you should go to the hospital, rumor has it that there's a woman there named Sarah that knows him."
    "Thanks for the info." she turned to walk but the man grabbed her shoulder.
    "My info isn't cheap." he said, "fine then take this!" said Rina. she turned and hit the guy in the face as hard as he could sending him flying into a wall. Then she walks to the hospital.
     
  9. LatiJediLukeAndLeia

    LatiJediLukeAndLeia New Member

    About ten minutes later Kristen came back with the two ice creams handing one of them to her brother Sky. Sky just ate his ice cream as he got up from Sarah's bedside and walked over to the window looking outside once again.
     
  10. Answer Man

    Answer Man Man I'm Awesome

    this time when Sky looked out the window, she saw a woman with mostly brown on with a cape and tiger like aura was walking to the hospital. Sky called Kristen over and she saw the person walking in.

    Hospital-
    Rina walked in and told the doc who she was looing for and the doc brought her to the room.

    Room-
    Sky and Kristen looked at Rina ready to fight for Sarah if they had to. but Rina put up her hand.

    "Look i'm not her to fight but I'm looking for Sarah Skywalker, is that her?"
    "Who are you"said Sky.
    "Rina, i just want to ask her some questions about John Resse."
    (can't put no more sorry.)
     
  11. LatiJediLukeAndLeia

    LatiJediLukeAndLeia New Member

    Sky and Kristen walked over to Sarah's bedside "Sarah wake up." Sky said as he lightly shook her wake.

    "What is it Sky?" Sarah asked sleepily.

    "There's someone here that wants to ask you some questions about your old Padawan." Sky said.

    Sarah looked toward the woman "Yes what do you want to know?" Sarah asked.
     
  12. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    "Thank you I'll meet you their, Jet out." Jet end his transmission and had entered the polis massa planet air space."Computer start count-down until imperials come into air space." Jet landed his ship in the east hanger bay. "computer activate mandalore droids: 1, 2, 4, 7. Just in case I have to use force instead of volunteer." Jet walked out of his ship with his droids in following he continued to ask where the jedi was until he finally got an answer.
     
  13. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    >By the way Answer Man, you are not allowed to control any type of action of somebody else's character. What you did by having Sky speak is an example of that. Do not do it anymore.<

    Tomno's ship was floating in some random part of space. "Sir, we have an incoming transmission concerning a new job." A robot spoke to Tomno.

    "Alright. Let's hear it." Tomno said.

    The robot pressed a button on it, and a hologram appeared in front of Tomno. It spoke. "Greetings friend. I have a job for you, and I will pay you well for it. On the asteroid medical station of Polis Masa, a woman is being treated there. The newly formed Empire is headed over there as we speak to capture her. I want you to go there and get her before the Empire does."

    "Why?" Tomno asked.

    "Because she is of great importance."

    "That isn't answering my question."

    "It is because she is believed to be one of the last remaining Jedi. In her current condition, she cannot escape the Empire."

    When Tomno heard the word Jedi, his first thought was to decline the mission. "You are aware I haven't even talked to a Jedi in years. What makes you think that I would want to save one?"

    "Because it is a job." The person answered. "I will pay you enough for you to be set for life. No more jobs. You could start a new life with the money I am willing to pay."

    Tomno sighed. "Fine. I'll do it. But I expect half of the money to be paid in advance."

    "Already done."

    "Okay. And where is the drop off point?"

    "You'll find out as soon as she is in your custody."

    "And who exactly am I retrieving?" Tomno asked.

    "This woman." Another hologram showed up, giving all these details and an image of Sarah.
     
  14. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    Jet sent a message to Tomno at what room she was in,"You better hurry, imperials are getting closer."
    Jet than ran to the control room of the space station.

    "hey you can't be in here! guards!" But then a mandalore droid jumped up and sliced the intercom with his lightsaber.

    "I'm sorry, but I'm taking over this space station, imperials are on there way here and I need to protect some people on this station from them. droids 1 and 2 activate the stations waepons system, 4 you take the ship and fight the star destroyer and bring it back after the jedi has left the station. 7 your with me in the fighters. this is going to be one hell of a small war."
     
  15. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    >Jet was the one to send the message? Oh well, sorry for putting any words in his mouth...<

    Tomno grabbed his blaster. He made sure it was full of ammo and gas and stuff. "Alright. Let's get this mission over with."

    The robot nodded. It pressed a button on it's arm, and the crusier jumped into hyperspace.

    A few moments later, they were orbiting Polis Masa. Tomno ran to the docking bay of his crusier. There was one fighter ship there. It was a V-Wing (Incase you don't know, it is a fighter ship the Rebels use. It is the fastest ship, faster than the Millenium Falcon). This V-Wing was one of a kind, being the first of it's kind. Tomno had actually stolen the plans for it from a Hutt, and he created this ship. He jumped in the pilot's seat. He looked down at the robot.

    "The usual sir?" It asked.

    "Yes." Tomno answered. "Nobody comes in or out while I'm gone. Set up the defensive shield and cloaking device as soon as I'm in space."

    The robot nodded. "Yes sir."

    The bay door opened up, showing the outside space. All the stars and Polis Masa. Tomno's ship hovered 10 feet in the air before shooting out of his crusier.
     
  16. LatiJediLukeAndLeia

    LatiJediLukeAndLeia New Member

    John was almost at Polis Masa but he knew he was still behind the rebels. He wanted to get to the hospital before the rebels did he had something special planed for Sarah just because he was on the Dark Side didn't mean that he no longer cared for her. He just wanted her to be safe and kidnapping her was going to insure that. "How much longer before we get to Polis Masa?" he asked the Storm trooper that was flying the Imperial Cruiser. "About ten more minutes." the Storm trooper replied.
     
  17. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    *yeah jet sent the message, it's ok you put words into his mouth, I kind of left that open for someone to do. also I added what my droids, ship, and ship size are on my profile.*

    "Sir there is a ship trying to land in the hanger, it seems to be a V-wing. what are your orders?" Jet sat there for a minute thinking, your late, imperials will be here in five minutes. He won't be able to get off the space station with the jedi until the empirals are defeated.

    "Umm, yes let him in, also tell the ship to actviate all droids, and send them to their starviper fighters, but do not launch until I give the singal."
     
  18. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Tiny lights whizzed by out of the frontal view port from the Bridge of Praesentia. Optical sensors might register them as stars, but they were moving too fast to be seen by the human eye as anything other than small anomalies. Putus Ops, the True Dark Lord of the Sith, stared out of the viewport, seeming to scan the very space he flew through for an answer... An answer to a question he did not even understand. His connection to the Force was so strong, every time a star passed by, he could feel the strength of every creature on the planet. They were, after all, flying through hyperspace without any coordinates other than his mind. As he scanned space, the ship seemed to tilt and move in whatever direction his min nudged it. And the ship was moving far to fast to be registered by any type of scanner.

    It was like he was a ghost in the infinite blackness of space.

    Suddenly, the ship stopped. He made a hand motion to his apprenti, and they understood immediately. The ship began its descent upon what appeared to be an arid desert-like world. Strange statues of powerful looking figures encompassed the landscape, and the planet itself bore the battle scars of the Great Hyperspace war over 1000 years ago. As the ship gently touched down, Ops turned, and without a word, made his way off the landing platform and onto the planet. His apprenti followed without question.

    As his Krayt Dragonhide boots smacked the dry sandy ground of Korriban, he felt an immense aura of power. Something somewhere was hiding on this forgotten planet, and he intended to find the source of the power. He slowly scoured the grounds of Korriban, glancing at the corpses of bodies around him. Some were Sith, some were Jedi, and some were Jedi who turned Sith, but he saw no True Sith amongst the decaying life other than himself and his apprenti.

    Looking around at the various tombs of Sith Lords, he could recall various occassions when he had actually known some of them. Freedon Nadd... Naga Sadow... And then he came upon the tomb of his idol, the once feirce and greatest of the Sith Lords, Marka Ragnos. He could feel some truly intense power coming from the tomb. He scanned through it in the Force, searching for the power. And then he found it. But not with whom he expected.

    "Wait here" he coldly instructed to his apprenti. And they obeyed him, without question. They knew better than to challenge his power.

    They simply bowed and replied in unison, "Yes, my Master."

    He walked through the tomb... Various bodies littering the halls. The stench coming from the tomb was intoxicating, for it was the stench of power. He also began sensing one of his own within the tomb... A True Sith. This actually made him excited. As he followed his instinct, he finally came into a blank room. No corpses, no rubble, just an immense aura of the Dark Side. There was a singal coffin in the center of the room. He gave it a stern look, and raised a finger, sending a whisper through the Force that blasted the coffin apart. The decayed corpse of Marka Ragnos lay in its place, still clutching at his famed blade. This was not the source of the power. He looked around the room and felt a presence. He could sense it, he could make out the form of the person, but he did not see them.

    "Do not be afraid," he said sternly, "I am your True Master... And I have returned."
     
  19. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    Darth Menos stayed in the shadows. The man had such a strong presence in the Force that he sensed him as soon as he came out of hyperspace. He grabbed his lightsaber but didn't activate it. The glow would give away his position. "Who're you? Why did you destroy my masters tomb? What do you want here?" Menos moved around in the shadows so it would be even harder to find him.
     
  20. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Putus chuckled a moment, his breath going through the mask translating what should have sounded like laughter into what appeared to be a predators snarl.

    "I am Putus Ops... The most powerful member of the True Sith Race. I sense a strong touch of power among you boy... I might be able to help you harness your true strength..."

    Ops lightsaber found his right hand, still unactivated.

    "Dare you try to resist my wishes, and you will be ended swiftly."
     
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