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Nations RP: OOC/SU

Discussion in 'Archive' started by GrandShadow, Jun 22, 2009.

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  1. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    There was once a world much like ours. There was a great continent called Vance. It was separated into four great nations. To the north was Monos, the largest country. They were ruled by a kind and gentle king and queen. Their large country allowed it the resources to survive nearly anything. To the east was Teyos. The people of Teyos were always looking ahead. they were the most advanced in the world. They were a democracy and always were united. To the west was Attrox. It was ruled by a fiecre dictatorship. It was always ready for anything. To the south was Lato, a peaceful country. Lato was made up of the people who fled from war or oppression. They were a direct democracy. The four great countries would meet once a year at the center of their world, a large obelisk tower called the Grand Citadel. They would send chosen representatives and discuss matters of trade and peace. Everything was perfect.

    Then everything changed. The leaders of Attrox grew jealous and greedy of the world. They wanted it for themselves or they would destroy it. At the yearly peace meeting the representatives from Attrox didn't show. Instead they waited for the rest of the representatives to enter and then they destroyed the Citadel with them inside. It was a declaration of war against the world. Within a month, Attrox conquered Lato and turned its people into slaves. Monos and Teyos were startled by the speed of the Attrox military. They formed a shacky alliance and began the war to defeat Attrox.

    RP rules: Basic rules apply. No god-moding, no power-playing.
    Also the weaponry is swords, spears and the like, middle ages and renaissance stuff. No lasers, guns or keyblades.
    There is magic and monsters though.

    I want SUs like this↓
    Name:
    Age:
    Alliance:
    (Attrox=Evil/Monos, Teyos, Lato=Good)
    Appearance: (use lots of detail or a picture)
    Bio: (a short or long bio. no 'explain in rp' stuff)
    Personality:
    Weapon:
    Powers:
    (magic, special abilities)​
     
  2. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    Name: Dirk
    Age:30
    Alliance: Attrox
    Appearance: [​IMG]
    Bio: A warlord of the great Attrox. fears nothing, but the gods themselves. inrolled in the military at age of 18 and plans on taking the world even if he has to kill his own to do so.
    Personality: evil and twisted
    Weapon: sword, sheild and a attached crossbow on his right arm
    Powers: shoots dark energy orbs and has other magic dark powers
     
  3. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    Nice.

    here's my first SU

    Name: Seth Daigun
    Age: Unknown
    Alliance: Attrox
    Appearance:
    [​IMG]
    Bio: Seth was born thousands of years ago. He has stayed alive due to his ancient religion. He worships beings called the Eternals and as long as he obeys there laws he can't die from old age. He remembers the building of the Citadel, the creation of the four countries. He wandered for decades until he came to Attrox. The leader welcomed him and he made friends among the Attrox people. When the goverment declared war on the world, Attrox felt he had to repay his new country. He joined in the war as an advisor to the Attrox leader. He's in charge of creating the battle strategies their army uses. With his vast knowledge of history, his plans are flawless.
    Personality: Seth is wise and stays calm no matter what happens. He is resourceful, able to pull victory from even the bleakest of battles. He always seems to be thinking of something and holds manners in high regard. He tends to lecture others and doesn't let things bother him as much.
    Weapons: He uses the scythe inthe picture. He keeps the scythe sealed in a ring on his right hand so he won't have to carry it everywhere. He wears a ring on his left hand but nobody has seen what he has sealed in it.
    Powers: Seth is well versed in many magics and can use any spell he encounters. However he hates to use magic, preferring to settle things with his scythe. His extremely long life has allowed him to master the weapon better than any other. He can pull manuevers many can only dream of.
     
  4. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    wow that pic is incredibily awesome looking
     
  5. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Name: Storm Valentine
    Age:
    Alliance: Dictator of Attrox
    Appearance:
    Bio:
    Personality:
    Weapon:
    Powers:

    Will edit later
     
  6. InugamiGod

    InugamiGod New Member

    Oh man. Do I have to put a picture? cause i'm 80% done with making a character for this.
     
  7. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    only if you want to.
     
  8. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Name: Storm Valentine

    Age: 605

    Alliance: Dictator of Attrox

    Appearence: 6'0" even, weighs 243 pounds, and has long blonde hair, ponytailed at the end with dark/dirty look to it. Wears a white scruffy collar, long-sleeve white tux shirt with dark purple vest. The coattails of his vest make a V shape going downwards. He wears black tux pants with Dragonhide boots and Alligator teeth belt buckle with leather fitting and custom vortex belt buckle. Holds a shiny gold handled Cutlass at his side, along with a black and gold plated multi-barrel Pistol.

    Biography: Storm is from a very prodigious family of wealthy upperclass citizens. Being as such, it was very easy for him to obtain power and control over his subordinates. Master fencer, Expert Marksman, and good with Shotokahn martial arts, he is a worthy opponent for any to face in or outside his 13,000 square foot mansion and gardens. His immense wealth has enabled him to buy out most of his enemies, and he has become the figure for the new movement to take over the continent. His newly formed Dictatorship has given him the power to manipulate the regions and gain popularity in other areas. His wealth has additionally given him access to the premeire items in Vance , along with the latest technology. He bought and owns a multiple-barrel solid black gold pistol. This being a notch up from the commonly used single-shot weapons, Storm's pistol is capable of firing up to six shots without reloading.

    Five-Hundred and Seventy Eight Years Ago...

    Storm was seventeen years old. He had gotten trapped in a gorge while hunting, and was being chased by carnivorous animals. A large Minotaur was hot on his heels, and a Griffin was preparing to attack him from above. The Minotaur smashed the side of his head with a swipe of his monstrous arm, and the Griffin was quickly closing in. Storm was loosing blood fast, which would attract even more creatures. Suddenly, the Griffin fell from the sky, gripping at his throat as if in some kind of unbeleivable pain. He crashed into the ground, and the Minotaur turned to stop. He decided to attack the weakened Griffin.

    As he was about to prey on him, a shadow emerged and drove the Minotaur into the ground, killing him in seconds thereafter. Storm slowly stood up, clutching his still bleeding head. Then, the shadow dashed at him and sank fangs into his throat, draining him to the point of death. Storm awoke hours later, feeling incredibly fueled, and filled with an insatiable thirst for blood. He dived at the still liing corpse of the Minotaur, and drained him completely, where the Griffin soon followed. Empowered with a fruitfull life ahead of him, Storm returned to Attrox, changed, and somewhat more powerful. Over time, he developed a power, one that all of his kind do other than eternal life.

    He gained the dark gift of creation. He was able to influence people and organisms to his will, he could create a mansion in a matter of days with a few thoughts. He was able to create materials, to create emotion, to create life without a spouse.

    He had become a vampire.

    Personality: Valentine is a viscious strategist who will stop at nothing to control Vance. Being ruler of Attrox along with being from such a long line of rich nobles, he has gained his ancestors snobbish quirks, along with beleiving he is better than anyone else.

    Weapons: Sword, Pistol, teeth

    Abilities: Expert Fencer, good with Shotokahn. Able to drain blood to fuel him, cannot die by common means, can gain tremendous strength by giving in to his "Dark Side."

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    Name: Caedus

    Alliance: Evil

    Appearence: Caedus stands at 6'5", and weighs 233 pounds. He wears long black and purple make-shift silk pants, along with an overflowing purple robe that hangs just above the ground. His face is covered by the hood of the robe, and he wears midnight black silk gloves. His body is covered in tattoos and ancient symbols of a long forgotten race. His skin is a tan color.

    Biography: Caedus is perhaps the strangest being presently alive. His mystical tattoos and strange incantations startle most who see him. His body itself is quite intimidating, bearing markings of the forgotten civilization of Ammit. Ammit was a supersticious culture who honoured the different Gods of the known world. Isis was the god of Wisdom, and the main one the poepl of Ammit treasured. They practiced their Sacred rituals and magical spells to honor and appease Isis. Amun Ma'at, God of Justice, was protector to Isis. Caedus despised both of these creatures, and so he sided with both Osiris and Ra, the Gods of Death and Sun.

    With the newfound power and hatred fueled by these vengeful spirits, Caedus acted their will and destroyed Ammit and it's people. No one knows how long he has been alive, only that the records of Ammit date back to other 2,500 years ago. He has long since been in slumber, it is assumed, until recently. He has arisen once more, sensing the bloodlust and stench of war. His powers are stronger than he could remember. Bearing the Sceptor of Seth, God of the Desert, he has become the High Preist of Attrox. Befriending Storm Valentine, his thirst for war has never been closer to being quenched. Many question as to where his powers limits are, and where it comes from.

    It comes from his soul, but is channeled through his scepter. The only reason being is that he posseses the long famed and sought after "Eye of Ra", what he says was a gift from the God himself. It replaces his right eye. He also posseses the Ankh of Osiris, his right arm. It is covered in pure gold, malleable and wanted by many. Using these tools, he releases the power of the Gods upon his foes.

    Seth Daigun is Caedus's closest friend. Having met over 1000 years ago, the two have confided in eachother ever since. After all, what use is a mortal to an immortal, might as well befriend your own kind. Not only being the high priest, Caedus is one of the highest ranked generals in Attrox's army.

    Personality: Caedus is precise and diligent. His beleifs lie in the gods, and his bloodlust has kept him properly motivated for many years. The only person he actually shows the slightest bit of emotion with is Seth. He is his longest friend.

    Weapons: Caedus has a crescent moon shaped blade he calls "Orpheus." The blade seems to have a life of its own as it is often seen slashing through the battlefield with noone controlling it. He uses ancient styles of his people to wield it.

    Abilities: He can summon the dead, and he posseses the ability to launch bolts of lightning from the sky or his body. By summoning immense power, he can expel large amounts of energy and force from his body. Depending on the power of these attacks, they can cost him between very little and monumental amounts of energy.


    Theres two Shadow
     
    Last edited: Jun 26, 2009
  9. Mike

    Mike Member

    Guess I'll choose a different alliance in that case.​

    EDIT: Changed alliance to Monos

    Name: Mithyl Monterray, Paladin of Monos
    Age: 28
    Alliance: Ambassador of Monos
    Appearance:

    [​IMG]

    =-==-=
    Blade with whom I have lived, Blade with whom I now die,
    Serve the light one last time, Seek one last heart of evil,
    One last life of pain, Cut well old friend...and then it is farewell...
    =-==-=​

    Bio: Mithyl is jokingly known by the townspeople of Lato as the 'miracle child.' After nearly drowning at a young age, Mithyl claims that he had once 'gone into the light' and claims he can recall his own death quite vividly. This has labelled him as legendary according to some, and as a lunatic according to others. Luckily for him, the noblemen of Monos care not for such superstition and assign positions based on merit and allegiance alone.​

    His father Laertes was captain of a legion of the Monos guard, and as such, pressured Mithyl to begin his soldier training at a young age. However, Mithyl just did not take. His father, eager to involve Mithyl in the military life, decided he would teach his son the art of smithing. It wasn't until many years later that Mithyl could comfortably wield a sword, after practicing with his own crafted work.​

    At the age of 14, Mithyl was called to Monos's royal courtyard. He was to forge a weapon of such beauty that would stand as a testament to the kingdom of Monos' rich culture. Mithyl gladly respected the king's wishes and produced his finest work. Before presenting it to the king, he took his smithing hammer and took one swift swing at the sword, curving the blade slightly.​

    Upon presenting the blade to the king, the king was appalled. Surely any blacksmith could produce a straight blade! It was only after Mithyl explained that only God Himself could create something which is without flaw and anything humans craft must be imperfect, that the king recanted and gladly accepted Mithyl's humble gift. The king rewarded Mithyl with an honorary position on his father's legion.​

    Three years later, two bandits from Attrox snuck into the kingdom of Monos by day, and snuck out of the kingdom of Monos, wielding Mithyl's beautiful gift, by night. Laertes took his legion, Mithyl included to retrieve the sword. The guards of Attrox were not prepared to let Mithyl and his fellow soldiers into their kingdom over something so childish, and so it was at this time that Mithyl's negotiating skill shone. He convinced not only the guards to let him (and him alone) into the city, but he even convinced the bandits to return the blade...without a fight!​

    The king was so pleased with Mithyl that he wished to grant him anything. Mithyl simply said that he wished to be the king's messenger. He decided that if war could be prevented, it must be prevented at all costs. This was his creed.​

    It wasn't until 5 years later, that Mithyl finally displayed his physical strength. The townspeople of Monos were terrorized by a dragon, which kept eating their livestock and destroying their homes. Mithyl's own dwelling was burned to the ground, with his entire family (except for he and his father) inside. Laertes was in agony, his entire life was built with this woman, his children who he loved dearly... He set out to slay said dragon. He fought very bravely and died very quickly...Mithyl had no one left.​

    Mithyl donned his heaviest armor, adding a layer of leafy tunics (on the inside) to help absorb heat. He took his favourite sword and shield (all hand crafted of course) and set out to reason with the dragon.​

    Foolishness. The dragon would not listen to the words of its dinner.​

    The dragon crushed Mithyl with its tail. Mithyl, in his final moments, uttered his famous words:​


    Blade with whom I have lived, Blade with whom I now die,
    Serve the light one last time, Seek one last heart of evil,
    One last life of pain, Cut well old friend...and then it is farewell...

    He valiantly stabbed the dragon, and to his surprise, the heavens themselves poured light onto him...and he grew wings. He flew up above the dragon and swiftly stabbed his blade through its skull.​

    The townspeople rejoiced, and began to call Mithyl the miracle child, for his life was spared twice. The king, in his graciousness, declared that Mithyl be known as a Paladin of the kingdom of Monos, for his affiliation with the light.​

    And so, 6 years later, Mithyl still serves as the king's ambassador...but in light of Attrox's tardiness and lack of attendance at the Grand Citadel, Mithyl could do little to stop the tension with Attrox.​

    Personality: Almost a bit too much of a push-over, Mithyl will work very hard to avoid a fight. He is one of the kindest soldiers to be found on the battlefield. He consistently donates his weapons and armor, as well as food, to fellow soldiers and beggars for no cost.​

    Weapon: Anything a smith can craft. Traditionally, he uses a one handed weapon, such as a sword, or mace, and a shield, but has been known to cast aside his shield for a two handed weapon such as a pike or battle axe.​

    Powers: Mithyl has the power of light. He is spiritually attuned and can regenerate his wounds faster than most people can. He also has the ability to fly on wings of light, when his life is in peril.​


    (Hope that's not too 'god-like' for you...I won't over-abuse it, just thought it'd be neat!)
     
    Last edited: Jun 30, 2009
  10. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    don't over use the flying and i'm ok with him. accepted. and you know Lato is the conquered country right?

    @Storm: accepted. they're all excellent

    Name: Jake Coros
    Age: 19
    Alliance: Monos
    Appearance:
    [​IMG]
    Bio: Jake had a pretty normal life. His parents provided for him, he had friends, and he was skilled in everything presented to him. Then everything change at his sixteenth birthday. His birthmark on his arm glowed and things began floating around him. Once the glow stopped everything fell. His parents immediately contacted any religious or scientific person they could find. None of them could figure out the cause. When word leaked out about what happened he became the town freak. His parents couldn't bare the shame and dishoned him. Then the war broke out and with his town being on the border of Monos and Attrox, it was destroyed rather quickly. He fled into the woods and began trying to master his powers. He left a year later to find anyone that could tell him about his powers but something happened. Again his birthmark glowed but he blacked out. He woke up in a jail and reports claim he had slaughtered twenty people. It soon began to happen everytime he fell asleep. So he swore to never sleep as he searched for his answer.
    Personality: Kind but irritable due to his self inflicted insomnia. He's always trying to help despite any risk of self injury.
    Weapon: The sword in the picture. He was trained by his father who was a famed swordsman. He's skilled with it but actually prefers to avoid fights.
    Powers: He's learned to control them somewhat but they still but a great deal of strain on him. By focusing his energy he can levitate things in the environment to fight. He can make rocks float and bombarde the enemy, arrows fly out and attack, he can even make a sword impale its owner. He's trying to fully grasp his power but occasionally by overusing it he'll black out. When he wakes up he's usually found around dead people.
     
  11. Mike

    Mike Member

    Didn't realize that sorry...mind if I switch to Monos? Otherwise my story doesn't make the most sense S: I was mislead slightly by your description haha.

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    And for the flying; I don't mean to use it much at all...I just thought he should have a bit of survivability (like he gets the crap knocked out of him, his wings save his ass and fly him like 20 miles east (lol) and he passes out) for two reasons:

    1) He's not the best fighter (I designed him that way), and I intend to use him as a diplomat, not as a warrior (so don't worry about "God-moding" or invincibility)
    2) He was, thus far, the only member of the 'good' side. Most people are (and for good reason...I would have too if not everyone did) going to choose the Attrox alliance.
     
  12. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Nice character Mike... I like it. Good bio too, good and long (like mine :D)

    Thank you Shadow for the acceptance btw. Nothing you need me to change? nice character to you too btw.
     
  13. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    no everythings fine. oh and you can have as many characters as you want.
     
  14. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Im a happy happy happy happy camper!

    Ill make another SU in a bit.
     
  15. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    Name: Sela Vance
    Age: 24
    Alliance: Teyos
    Appearance:
    [​IMG]
    Bio: Sela was born to a poor family in Teyos. But she worked everything out with her two talents: fighting and creating. She was the best warrior of her age and was the youngest woman accepted into the Teyos army at sixteen. Her creative skills won her the attention of many inventors and with their help her ideas became reality. She rose through the monetary limitations of her youth to become one of the most influential people in Teyos. When Attrox began the war, she denounced them and promised to help bring peace with all her might. She's never failed to keep a promise, so Teyos believes and supports her decisions.
    Personality: She's kind and merciful. She's fiercely loyal and hates war. She believes those that break promises are trash and deserve whatever bad fortune befalls them.
    Weapon: The halberd in the picture. She's very skilled with it and favors a fast approach to fights, hoping to end thsm quickly.
    Powers: Her creativity has led to many inventions and she's quite smart. She usually spends her free time tinkering with things. This is also her greatest power because she'll see solutions where others couldn't.


    if we get just a couple more then i'd be willing to start.
     
    Last edited: Jul 2, 2009
  16. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Can I make another Attrox character, or does it have to be good?
     
  17. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    we've got 3 good, and 3 evil. it won't really matter so yeah, go ahead.
     
  18. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Heh heh heh, excellent. Ill have another SU up in a couple hours, g2g to work
     
  19. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    if we get a couple more characters i'll start this.
     
  20. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Sry bro. ive been busy. ill put one up before the night is out
     
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