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Another Kingdom Hearts Story IV- Dark World

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  1. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

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    It's been a 1000 years since the time of Ale becoming Kingdom Hearts. A lot has happened, including Kingdom Hearts being destoryed, a war of light vs darkness, and all the worlds taken over by darkness. Now a dark council rule over all the worlds, a dark lord rules every world. If you're not of the light, you're a slave working for the darkness, but even people of the darnkess are treated poorly. Everything seems to be lost, however some heros are begining to become reveealed, it's there story, and their turn. Can they do it, can they defeat the darkness, and return the world's to light?


    General Idea
    The general idea is this is a new Another Kingdom Hearts Story, new characters, new vilians, new story. It's sort of like Kingdom Hearts, the council is sort of like all the Disney Villians, it's made up of the dark lords of each world which is like the king of each world and main villian. Our heros are from Death Island, it was Destiny Island, and it doesn't look like Destiny Island any more, the water is crimson color, the sand is black, instead of the massive tree in the center it's a volcanoe, the trees are all dead, and there's barely any food. Everyone is poor, except this world, it's one of the best worlds to live on second to Traverse Town which is still the same, but just completely over ran by heartless. Our heros are just learning the work of there parents to take over there jobs and be able to continue helping the family survive and pay the lord of their world.


    Our heros are all good friends and have had strange dreams, they each have dreams of adventures of past AKHS heros like Niki, Shino, Will, Kate, Tom, Ale, so on. They are begining the way back to light, and they will soon recieve there own keyblades, and will take on the Dark Council.

    Roles~


    MAIN WORLDS AND LORDS~


    Dark Council~
    Death Island(Destiny Island)- Destiny Island gone dark is now Death Island. Everyone is now poor and run just family buisnesses. They must pay for there lives, if they can't pay they get killed. The water around the island is crimson red, the ground is cracking in places, instead of the giant tree in the center of the island is now a volcano. Little huts that are poor and run down are scattered accross the island, these are people's homes. There's one other big hut and a huge fancy mansion, the mansion is the home of Lord Duane and his daughter who is going to be one of the new light heroes, but no one ever suspects her to become a hero for light. The other hut is just a huge hut of a one room school house where the children learn about the light beung evil and terrible and the darkness is the best.----
    Lord Duane - Kairi Star


    Traverse Town(Traverse Town)- Traverse Town is still the same runaway world. It's the best place anyone could live. There's a disadvantage though. The streets are over ran bu heartless and at least 10 people per day become a heartless there. Also the people must pay for there lives.-----
    Vor- Mythril Roxas


    Dark Town(Twilight Town)- Dark Town was once known as Twilight Town. This was the last world to fall to darkness since it was the closes one to darkness. Instead of the skies being twilight now, the skies are pitch black, no stares nothing. Instead of just nobodies roaming the world, but both heartless and nobodies roam the world. Infact no one in Dark Town is a normal person, everyone is a human form nobody, no hearts. Everytime a child is born, the lord of this world gets to savage on it, some says he eats it, some say he makes 100 heartless out of just a super weak heart.
    Irabg- Mythril Roxas


    Hollow Bastion(Radiant Garden/ Hollow Bastion)- This was at one point a good place to live then a heartless kingdom then a good place and finally it's back to being a heartless kingdom. Here is said to be the production of heartless. The only beings living here are heartless, scattered here and there are some good hearltess, they're called Heartings since they are heartless bodies with the mind of there normal beings. They talk and communicate throught telepathic connections and they're like Sora when he was heartless, still in control. These being are usually locked up though in the castle dungeon.
    Geki- silvertrump


    The World of Darkness(NEW~The Dark Council Main World)- The darkest world ever. This world isn't anything else, it's just darkness. It's a dark city like The World that Never Was, but there are no lights, the signs glow darkness, there's no lights in the windows nothing. The people who are living are dying a slow painful death, to make it worst, the main ruler of the council and this world has made the people immortal and to feel like dying for everyday of their immortal lives. Heartless roam the streats. Just like Hollow Bastion there are some heartless who are still in control, some Heartlings. Some nobodies also roam the streets. Some dark human form nobodies rule under the main council leader and ruler of that world. This is a world said that no one with light in there hearts can survive, but will die immediately.
    Godfrid-sorabrawl


    MINOR WORLDS AND LORDS(Some may not have lords or A lord from a main world rules here also)~
    (Coming Soon)


    Human Nobodies Ruling under Main Villian-



    New Light Heros~(Close for now)
    Hoshi- Kairi Star
    Aiden- sorabrawl
    Adalyn- KeyofHope777
    Erif- Mythril Roxas
    - Ezoni- Mythril Roxas
    Zetsu- Silvertrump


    Mephisto(Demon)- Dessert Warrior





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    Hoshi is a normal girl. A normal girl during the dark times. Her father however is the lord of Death Island. She doesn't like that at all.

    Hoshi was sitting in class. She was staring outside. She couldn't stand learning about people who trash talked the light.​
     
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  2. LivingDeath

    LivingDeath Dormina'd

    Zetsu is sitting on the class either. His sight is blank, all that he tried to remember is "who am i?", but he can't still remember anything. All he knew that he is ordered to joined the class and get taught about Dark is supreme, and how to use weapon.

    His head lies in the table, like trying to remember anything.
     
  3. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Aiden was sitting down on the other side of class, holding his head down. The teacher talking about darkness made him sad. Why did he have to live in such a world, where darkness ruled over everything? He sighed, which made the teacher stop talking and look at him.
    "Excuse me, Aiden but did you just sigh? What's wrong?"
    The teacher looked like a crow and her face, looked crooked. Her deep red eyes went through Aiden's soul. She smirked and clicked her fingers. Heartless stepped into the room.
    "Heartless, take him to detention and then if he misbehaves again, you know what to do"
    The heartless nodded and Aiden's heartbeat started to pound. He caught the eyes of a girl, on the other side of the room, as he was dragged out of the classroom, not saying a word.
     
  4. Mythril Roxas

    Mythril Roxas New Member

    Ezoni looked up from his textbook to see Aiden leaving. He was sad, he was new, and he didn't like this environment. He didn't like the communist like teachers, the roaming heartless monsters in the halls, and outside of school, no place to run to for comfort. All he had was his friend Erif.

    Erif turned to Ezoni.
    "You'll be okay Ezoni, just hang in there. They wont take you away, as long as you stay your cool and listen to the teacher. One day, we'll have our revenge..."-Erif
    "...mhm...."-Ezoni
    They both looked back up to the teacher.
     
  5. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Hoshi saw him look. SHe snapped her fingers and the heartless stopped.

    "Put him back down in his seat." She said standing up.

    "Hoshi, what are you doing?" The teacher asked her.

    "You realise this class is boring as heck. I'd be sighing as well. But I don't want to embarass you trying to make the heartless take me away. But no matter what I still embarass you." Hoshu said. She sat back down. She crossed her arms. Her mother was the lightest heart and most beautiful lady on the island. Her father however was the darkest and is the dark lord of the island. Due to this she can control heartless whereever her father rules and when she's with her father on other worlds. Which only happened once. :_shi looked over at Aiden now back in his seat. The bell sudenly rung. She got up and went out first. Right away she was the first one out of the school. She felt the black dry sand already through her shoes. She was fortante. Almost everyone was poor and couldn't afford shoes and stuff. Many just where pants and girls will wrap cloth around there bodies. Only kids who go to the school families were rich and could aford thing.

    She started walking home on a huge hill. She looked and could see it. The bigest house on the island. She stopped and pushed her hair back behind her ears and started up the hill stepping over a foot crack. She saw many people along the dirt road selling crops and products they have grown. She stopped at one stand. She gave them 200 munny which was a lot. Taxes though were 2000.
     
  6. LivingDeath

    LivingDeath Dormina'd

    After the class, Zetsu decided to sit in the beach, trying to remember anything. The sand is dark, which like coloring his heart. Although many of people who get taxes, Zetsu seems didn't get to pay it, like someone has already pay it. He has ever asked who was pay it, but nobody know.

    "How could someone like me somehow live in here? Geez, its like there is a hole in my memory." whispered Zetsu.
     
  7. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Aiden ran upto Hoshi, panting.
    "Man, you can get out of school fast!"
    His bag was like carrying a tonne because he had many textbooks inside. Aiden stood up and smiled.
    "Thanks for helping me out back there, I don't know what those heartless would have done if you didn't say anything...so-"
    Aiden looked down and up, wondering if he should ask her why he helped her if her dad was evil.
    "-what made you help me?"
     
  8. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Adalyn sighed as she walked out of her her last hour class, slinging her bag over her sholder as she walked out the front doors of the school. These classes are stupid she thought to herself angrily as she walked up the hill that led to town and from there: to her house. She saw Hoshi and Aiden ahead, she knew Aiden very well and had talked to him before on many ocasions. She probably would have stopped and talked to him if Hoshi was not standing there as well. She has never spoken to Hoshi before in her life, and she didn't trust her that much.
     
  9. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Aiden turned to face Adalyn.
    "Hey, how's it going Adalyn?"
    He smiled and walked upto Adalyn. He turned back to Hoshi briefly.
    "I should go home so thanks again, Hoshi!" he called.
    He turned back to Adalyn.
    "Do you want to walk with me?" he asked.
     
  10. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    The demon had been floating through the worlds. Nobody had bothered him for years. Because each world had become so dark, he easily blended in. All Mephisto looked like was a black cloud. He had found his way back to Death Island. "It's amazing how the worlds have changed. These islands no longer contain children's destinies. Just death." He noticed some kids talking to eachother outside of their school. "Hmm... How strange. People are still social."
     
  11. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Adalyn nodded "Sure, why not. We live on the same block anyway." she said with a friendly smile. She also waved at Hoshi though she said nothing to her "So what did she help you with anyway?" she asked Aiden as the two of them started walking in the direction of their street.
     
  12. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Hishi didn't answer. She knew why in her mind. She didn't want it getting out. She nodded and made a small smile continuing home again. She stepped inside right away being greeted by darkness. She looked to see her father appeared.

    "Hoshi, dear, how are you? How was school?" He asked. She looked at him.

    "Fine, fine like usual." She said. She started up the stairs to her room.

    "Fine, eh? Well hurry up we got training to do." Her father said.



    OOC:: I'm on my cell laptop is dead and charging so in the morning I'll editt in Hoshi"s father's name.
     
  13. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Suddenly someone in the shadows crept up from behind Hoshi's father, Lord Duane and pushed him from behind.
    "Lord Duane, we haven't met for a while" he spoke, as he stepped out of the shadows, glaring his yellow snake like eyes at Hoshi. His name was Godfrid. He had panther black hair and darkened skin, like his skin was dilluted with oil. His black leather jacket hung down to the ground like black smoke.
    "I'm afraid to tell you Duane, that your daughter has been messing with the wrong kind of people, the people of light"
    Godfrid gave Hoshi a look of disgust and hate.
    "Duane, I want the heartless to scower through the islands for anybody with light inside of them....and Duane, I suggest you kill Hoshi. She's never going to be of use to you or the darkness. Her heart is almost fully light. They have corrupted her. Dispose of her NOW!"
    He disappeared, leaving a dark cloud over Hoshi and Duane's heads.
     
  14. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    "What!? I don't got anybody who I'm friends with. No one!" Hoshi complained. Lord Duane looked over at his daughter.

    "Hoshi, he's not going to lay a hand on you, he can do everything else to people on teh island, but he won't lay a hand on you." Lord Duane said. He walked over to the window.

    "You do have your mother's light, you need to try and work on getting rid of that light, or eventually you'll become a threat to me." Duane said. Hoshi looked at him.

    "Now come on we got work to do." He said. They stepped outside. They started the training. The sun was finally down. The heartless were going to be going out over the night. Hoshi headed upstairs. Lord Duane sat at his seat out on the balcony watching heartless begining to appear.


    Hoshi was upstairs she laid down in bed. She looked around. She wanted to save the people, she hated the darkness. Her father she liked him, but hated who he was, a being of dark, trying to destroy her mother's family and her's light. Soon she began to fall asleep.


    Hoshi began having a dream. She saw herself running down teh beach. A trail of light behind her. After she passed a certain spot it turned back into teh old Destiny Island. She stopped at the pier and saw a bunch of kids from school who's hearts were light rowing in toward the island. She smiled and she looked over the horizon a person flying accross teh water. She stared at them her eyes widening she fell fiward and soon projected foward. She opened her eyes and fell into teh water.

    She was laying on a tile ground. She looked around and stood up.

    "So the breed of light has returned. Stepping foward. It's your turn..." Hoshi heard.

    "Step foward don't be afraid... choose your weapon..." The voice said again. She couldn't hear a voice but she knew the words like they popped in her head. She looked around. A sword, a sheild, and a staff came up out of the ground and appeared. She looked around and ran foward she grabbed the sword. She looked and saw the ground crumbling around her. She fell through. She landed and looked around. Three secies showed up. Unbirth, Nobodies, and Heartless. She stood up. The sword in her hand emitted a bright light. She shielded her eyes from the light. She looked and saw a key shaped weapon in her hand.

    "Keyblade, keyblade, keyblade, keyblade... keyblade..." Hoshi heard. She looked at all the darkenss creatures heading toward her. She ran at them and slashed at them. She defeated all of them. She saw a passage way appearing leading to another platform. She sighed of relief. She looked down at the platform. She saw Niki Hart, Shino Heart, Koen Heart, Ale Heart, Kate Heart, Erin Heart, and a bunch o f other people. She then noticed somone. She ran over and fell to the ground and laid her hand over it.

    "Mom...." She said. She then looked next to her mother. She saw somone else. It was a little girl, but she reconised who it was though.

    "That's... me!" She exclaimed. She stood up and looked over at the pathway. She ran foward and started up it. The pathway disappearing behind her. She got to a new platform. She looked around and stepped foward. Heartless then appeared, but different from before. They represented different Dark Council Members. She stood ready. The creatures merged and a huge heartless appeared. She ran foward. Then a light shined down. She turned around to see a girl standing tehre that was all dark. It represented her. She stood ready. She began attacking the two creatures. It took along time but they were defeated. She fell to the ground tired. Below her it started turning to darkness nad was swallowing her. She fought it. A bright light appeared.


    She jumped up from her bed. She hurried out of her room and downstairs. She saw her father out on the balcony. She snuck out the front door and ran down the pathway. She picked up a bamboo stick along the side of the road.
     
  15. Mythril Roxas

    Mythril Roxas New Member

    Ezoni and Erif walked to their base in the caves.
    They met some of their friends there. They talked about the day's happenings, and then as the day started to fade, at night, they trained. They trained for the day that would come for when they would fight the darkness.
     
  16. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Suddenly Aiden was knocked out from behind by a knight heartless and hit the dirt of the pavement, head first, beside Adalyn's left foot. He drifted into darkness and felt himself plunge into the black spaces of the unknown. Aiden landed onto a circle, which had portraits of two warriors of the past, Sora and Shino. Three weapons emerged, a sword, a shield and a staff.
    He chose the staff and the ground fell beneath him like glass. He faced heartless, which surrounded him in fives. He took them out with the staff's blue starred end. He soon encountered a massive heartless ten times as big as Aiden. It had an open hole shaped like a heart. It started to pound it's fists towards Aiden. He stepped back but fell off the edge. Aiden started to shout in terror but he was able to cling onto the edge.
    Suddenly a girl's voice rang out and a flash of light caused him to close his eyes.
     
  17. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Adalyn screamed as Aiden suddenly was knocked out from behind. She whirrled around to see a knight heartless standing there. It attacked her before she had much chance to protect herself. She felt herself shoved back against one of the walls and fell to the ground. The heartless towered over her, it's blade raised to kill her. Adalyn instinctively raised her arm over her face as if to protect herself but she knew that the heartless had won. She heald her breath, waiting for death to come.
     
  18. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Hoshi saw the boy(Aiden) and girl(Adlyn) from school. She lept up into the air and came down on the heartless. She had just a wooden stick, so it didn't do much.

    "Get you and your friend out of here. Get anyone else with a light heart out of here, tehse heartless are ordered by Godfrid to kill all light heart people." Hoshi said. The heartless lept at her and pushed her to the ground. She kicjed it off her and jumped up.
     
  19. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Aiden suddenly woke up and looked at Adalyn and the heartless towering over her.
    "NO!!!"
    Suddenly his hand illuminated into bright white light and a keyblade, which looked like the same weapon, as it was in his dreams from the warrior, Sora was clenched in his hand. He slashed it through the heartless and Aiden reached down to Adalyn and held her hand.
    "Adalyn, are you okay!?" Aiden exclaimed.
     
  20. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Adalyn looked up at Chris, astonished "Chris!?" she said as she reached up and took his hand, allowing him to help her up. "What happened I thought you were..." she decided not to say 'dead' though she was thinking it. After seeing him fall into the shadows she thought she had lost her friend for good.
     
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