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Daisy the Cow

Discussion in 'Traditional' started by Chocobo Dyl, Mar 20, 2009.

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  1. Chocobo Dyl

    Chocobo Dyl New Member

    Lol, here's a little story that I sort of created (with a bit of help) so, enjoy the story of Daisy the cow.

    It was a lovely sunny day in the field of a town called dijaree-doo. But Daisy wasn't at all happy.

    Daisy was a cow, who lived on the field in Dijaree-Doo. Everybody agreed that she was the happiest cow in the world, but this one day, she was crying.

    The Chickens came over to Daisy's barn section and asked," Buk Bukk Bukkarackk, what's wrond, Buck, Daisy?" Through her tears she replyed," I don't fell special anymore, look at all the other cows, doing their handstands, and riding their motorcycles." The chickens clucked, and with that, ran off.

    That night, the chickens planned, and schemed, and thought, and planned more.

    The next morning, Daisy woke up,"AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!" She screamed,"I'VE LAYED A EGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The animals gathered around, and as she had told, she had layed an egg.

    This became the talk of the town, and soon the talk of the world, and people flocked to Dijaree-Doo to see Daisy.

    But the cows were jealous, they didn't feel special now, and one night they all thought. "I don't think that Daisy layed that egg." One said,"Cows don't lay eggs." They all agreed, and everyday they watched the egg, until one day.....

    One day, a pitter patter could be heard from inside the egg, cracks began to appear, and sure enough, the egg split in two, and a ball of fur was left behind. The cows laughed, and poked fun at Daisy.

    However, the ball of fur raised it's beak, opened it, and let out a big "MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!"




    THE END

    C&C is appreciated.
     
    Last edited: Mar 20, 2009
  2. Sakura-Fan

    Sakura-Fan New Member

    LOL nice ending...but it fells unfinished. write some more to it =]
     
  3. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    Yea. I like it, but you made it really unfinished. Keep it going.
     
  4. Betty Boop

    Betty Boop New Member

    I love this story. It is light-hearted and stands out amid all the fanfictions. It reminds me of early Walt Disney. I can picture animators making it into a storyboard. Please keep writing, as I see talent in you.
     
  5. Chocobo Dyl

    Chocobo Dyl New Member

    Thanks Betty, It's bee a long time since we saw you, how you been doing.

    Anyway @ summenorbrandon, Huh? It's a SHORT STORY, and the ending was clear...
     
  6. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    Actually, it's not. You just only said that the egg hatche d& gave out a big moooo. We don't een know what is inside the hatched egg, what had happened after that, how did Daisy's life is after the egg had hatched, & how the baby was.
     
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