Um..Hi

Hi SoraBrawl. yea you can call me Soph, and I'll keep a look out for Kairi Star. I do like writing, I'm writing a story on my laptop (though I don't think its very good).

 

Just say the word

If you guys want, I can give you a preview of the 2nd part of my story (I wrote it to show my friend, she's been engrossed in my story for weeks). I would love to hear what you guys think (and some constructive criticism would be helpful)!

 

Okay, since Chris has shown some interest, I'll put my story here:

Dawn ran. She ran faster than ever before, her head was throbbing and her mouth was dry, but she couldn’t stop now. At last, a high ledge hidden by other houses came into view, Dawn breathed a sigh of relief (which almost caused her to pass out from being out of breath), and slowly, made her way up, she slumped down on the floor, panting heavily, she smiled, she was safe.

“Thank god that’s over.” She panted, soon the pain stopped and her head calmed down. “What the hell is his problem?! Okay so he’s really angry at me for leaving and he’s really sexy, no...No he’s not! He’s annoying, yes, annoying.” She continued with her head in her hands.

“Oh, so I’m annoying now?” said a voice, Dawn looked up and gasped, in front of her was the very person she was running away from,

“Oh crap.” She whispered, trying not to burst into tears, “Can you not just bog off?”

“I can, and I will, and you’re coming with me.” The figure continued, and he held out his hand to help Dawn up,

“To hell with that!” she said and she sprung up and (very gracefully) somersaulted off the ledge, “So much for hidden from view.” She muttered as she ran away.
As she slipped through an alleyway, the figure chuckled,
“You can run, but you can’t hide, my Little Songbird.”
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It isn't very long cos its just a preview, I'm still writing the 1st part so the 2nd part is a work-in-progress.

 

Thanks! Glad you liked it