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Discussion in 'Audio and Visual' started by Plasmos, Mar 12, 2011.

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  1. Plasmos

    Plasmos Plasmos

    Entered this for a sotw on another forums, but any critique is welcome. idc.

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    EDIT LIGHTER COPY


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    Last edited: Mar 12, 2011
    Plasmos, Mar 12, 2011
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  2. Roxel The ultimate nobody

    Roxel The ultimate nobody Banned

    Obviously the only I can critique with constructive criticism is the words, try to blend them in a bit more with the background make the background stand out a bit more one simple word... Contrast!

    Other then that it's really good 9/10
     
    Roxel The ultimate nobody, Mar 12, 2011
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  3. Remedy

    Remedy Remnant

    i like the brushes, and thats a good render
    personally i thought the text looked really nice...
    personally not much you could improve on...
    It would be nice to see a brighter version, with all the colors much brighter
    just to compare the two
    maybe a border too? maybe
     
    Remedy, Mar 12, 2011
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  4. Plasmos

    Plasmos Plasmos

    Lighter copy posted.
     
    Plasmos, Mar 12, 2011
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  5. Cameron

    Cameron New Member

    Looks definitely better now than the previous one. props for ya man.
     
    Cameron, Mar 12, 2011
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  6. Remedy

    Remedy Remnant

    i like the lighter copy more...
     
    Remedy, Mar 12, 2011
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  7. Roxel The ultimate nobody

    Roxel The ultimate nobody Banned

    Yes the lighter copy shows much more contrast, great work 10/10 :]
     
    Roxel The ultimate nobody, Mar 12, 2011
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  8. Kitty

    Kitty I Survived The BG Massacre Staff Member Administrator

    I definitely prefer the lighter version. I don't know, there's almost something boring about it. I like that it's simple, but it's almost too simple for me. Or rather, it appears too simple. There's not really anything wrong with the signature, it's just not as eye-catching as some of your others. *shrugs* That was a lot of rambling to say the same thing, but there ya have it. I guess the only thing else I'd comment on would be the text. Placement and color and everything looks fine, but it looks to me like the text was just sharpened a little too much. It kind of has that look to me around the edges. *again with the shrugging*
     
    Kitty, Mar 13, 2011
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  9. Plasmos

    Plasmos Plasmos

    I agree I wanted it to have that simplicity feeling to it you know? The text was way over sharpened due to lack of creativity in this piece. /signs. I dunno, I'm in the same boat as you are. I think I should have added more to the bg because it seems like it's a lot of negative space in the tag as a whole.
     
    Plasmos, Mar 13, 2011
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  10. Remedy

    Remedy Remnant

    Hey Dem what brushes did you use on this, and min sharing where you got them?
     
    Remedy, Mar 13, 2011
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  11. Plasmos

    Plasmos Plasmos

    I just used a circle brush and started smudging it.
     
    Plasmos, Mar 13, 2011
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  12. Avalantos

    Avalantos Mr. Detective

    Awesome smudging, focal is too dark but as the colour co-ordination is so good then it doesn't really matter too much.

    (this is for both, I still find the colour to dark on the brighter one)

    8.7/10
     
    Avalantos, Mar 13, 2011
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  13. Plasmos

    Plasmos Plasmos

    lmao!

    Aye Rhys, whole time the focal point was my main weakness, I used too much curves and contrast. lawlzz!
     
    Plasmos, Mar 13, 2011
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  14. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    As you know, I have a thing for brightness. I am more into the lighter copy. -___- Still, that "Sora" lettering is a little bit too "bold" for me. Also, the smoke that you have behind Sora almost look as though he have wings. I also saw that you have four tiny stars. If you can illusion/ make copies of them and spread them out, I think that you can bring out the warm night scenery from it.
     
    EtherealSummoner, Mar 14, 2011
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