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A Whole New Kingdom Hearts Story OOC/SU

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Ventus, Oct 16, 2010.

  1. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    SURE! Make your character here and Ventus should be able to accept it.
     
  2. Zipher

    Zipher New Member

    sweet thanks :) if i had good rep id rep you but im a noob so i have no rep so i wont spam you with a "zero" :p

    name: Cavus
    title/role: henchman of Zarnic(not the right hand man), but doesnt quite follow his agenda, they just happen to have a similar goal so he joined with Zarnic
    age:21
    bio: Cavus grew up in the upper class of Sora, his real name was Adrian Hydrus, but as he got older he got fed up with the greediness and snobbish nature of the upper class and decided to kill his family and burned the family buisness to the ground and changed his name to Cavus which is latin for hollow. He took it upon himself to rid the upper class of the truly corrupt but by doing this darkness corrupted his heart and just before he lost his heart Zarnic saved him and now he works for Zarnic as long as the share the same goal but he feels a sense of fealty to Zarnic for saving him
    weapon: two hidden blades (like ezio from ac2)
    Job: doesnt have one he has alot of money on the bank due to his past
    personality: usually emotionless (an effect from almost losing his heart to the darkness) but has a quick temper, very cold and sarcastic
    powers/strengths: physically rather strong, and fights well at night
    weakness: his temper and doesnt do well in sunlight
    dream: wants to destroy the upper class of Sora and leave the lower class to rot
    appearance: six feet tall slender with black hair and blue streaked bangs, eyes are black where the white of the eyes are yellow for irises and then regular pupils, wears a black hooded jacket with a purple shirt, black pants and black boots
    ill post a pic when i have one of him
    theme: im thinkin one of these what you guys think?
    -riku theme rock remix
    -xions final battle theme
    -evanescense whisper instrumental version
    just pul them up on youtube i dont have enough points to post the urls myself :/
    if you dont like anything or i need to change it for any reason let me know
     
  3. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    Brandon, you are NOT this RP's creator. You do NOT know if profiles are still being accepted or not, so don't assume that they will be.
     
  4. Zipher

    Zipher New Member

    requiem, just gonna say i created the profile idk if it sent or not since it hasnt shown up but if ventus says no go then i will accept that and i wont post anything more
     
  5. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    I have been busy recently so I will be posting less often. Secondly, you may make a signup.
     
  6. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    If you were wondering, your post needed to be validated to show up. I did it, so there you go.
     
  7. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    You're accepted IF you can answer these questions.

    1. Why does he hate the upper class? What event/turning point occured to cause this hate? What did his family do to him?
    2. Why is he working for Zarnic if he already has the money?
    3. How do Zarnic and Cavus have a similar objective? Zarnic IS high class.
    4. Why does he want both classes, low and high, to die? Perhaps Cavus and the heroes could have a temperory alleigance?
    5. How will Cavus have an impact on the plot? A twist? What is his role? Don't make him a mary sue
     
  8. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    Just outta curiosity, how long until I can get more involved with the plot? I like being the bad guy and all, but I don't exactly have a reason to go to a bunch of really poor people. And (Even though I can think of something), there isn't much that I can actually post.
     
  9. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    At least we are making this roleplay move along while Ventus and Nicole are absent.
     
  10. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Warning to roxion for not posting enough lines
     
  11. Zipher

    Zipher New Member

    . Why does he hate the upper class? What event/turning point occurred to cause this hate? What did his family do to him? - when he was 14 he watched several families get dragged out of their houses and beaten to the brink of death because they got laid off at work and couldn't pay their rent which opened his eyes to corruption of the upper class, and as years passed and poverty worsened he continually was forced by his family to sit and watch as his father and older brother "reprimanded" people for "skipping rent" because that was their job ad they wanted to make him join and over the years watching the injustice over and over again fed a fire and one day his father sent him with his brother to do a job that his father was too busy to take care of and he intervened and fought with his brother and at that point he decided to wipe out the corruption of the upper class, and when he returned home he found his brother had beat him back and told their father and his father stripped him of all possessions and secretly locked him in jail, under a false name, for what should have been a life sentence but he "pulled a monte cristo" and escaped after 2 years and that is why he killed his family first.

    2. Why is he working for Zarnic if he already has the money? -Hes working for Zarnic because he sees the evil and greed of Zarnic and it looks to Cavus that he hasnt lost his heart to darkness so Cavus is working for him just long enough to learn how to control darkness and to safely see his agenda through, he doesn't work for Zarnic for money, just power

    3. How do Zarnic and Cavus have a similar objective? Zarnic IS high class.-Zarnic wants to extend his power to more worlds and so does Cavus

    4. Why does he want both classes, low and high, to die? Perhaps Cavus and the heroes could have a temporary allegiance? -He wants both to die because he wants an end to corruption and in his eyes the only way to rid Sora of the corruption is a complete and thorough purge and he wants to see many other worlds purged in the same fashion, and there could be a temporary allegiance between them Cavus will do anything to see the corruption ended (and yes i see the irony in that because Cavus is corrupt himself haha )

    5. How will Cavus have an impact on the plot? A twist? What is his role? Don't make him a mary sue -first off i have no clue what a mary sue is, but i intend for him to play the role of the minor villain, as in his purpose is to test the limits of the heroes and for a twist he could be the one who ends Zarnic, who knows, cant really call a twist till i see an opportunity for it you know?

    and i must say thank you ventus, whether or not you like my answers i feel like ive created a much deeper character by answering those questions
     
  12. Roxion

    Roxion New Member

    hee hee, my bad :3 how many lines? 3?
     
  13. Zipher

    Zipher New Member

    i believe it is 6
     
  14. Roxion

    Roxion New Member

    ok, won't happen again
     
  15. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    Roxion, YOU SHOULD KNOW THAT. The limit for the Beginner area is 3 and the advanced is 6. You should KNOW the rules by now.

    /endrant.

    Anyways, anybody know Destiny's lifestatus?
     
  16. Roxion

    Roxion New Member

    I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY!!! by beginner and advance I assume you mean RPers, not the RP itself
     
  17. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    you've passed the test. you can post now!
     
  18. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    I can't believe that you went and put him through that. ??? Since Nicole won't be on for a while, is her character will just follow yours?
     
  19. Zipher

    Zipher New Member

    sweet :)

    it was no sweat H.Summoner, Ventus probably just wanted to make sure i wouldn't make his RP a bad one seeing as i have no RP history on this sight and very little in general
     
  20. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    You read my mind.
     

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