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ETERNAL SAGA TO THE DOOR...OOC and SU

Discussion in 'Archive' started by DESTATI, Oct 30, 2010.

  1. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    ETERNAL SAGA TO THE DOOR


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    Darkness is Eternal...

    Light must be as well...

    But what of Nothing?

    (Highlight text above and be enlightened!)​


    We must rise to the light...or fall to the darkness...but what of the realm in between? Twilight must lie upon the hazy hills of gray nothingness....Will we be awoken to darkness, to light, or become overwhelmed by that of the hollow? Eternally striving for the door, what will we amount to? But, darkness in zero? Any way we go on our paths toward the door, we do so together but in our own inner universe: ones to be crossed by the others and ventured in and beyond into the heart. Thus may our paths cross and that released to us together be embraced or rejected...

    But what will we sacrifice?


    Theme Music:


    Intense Theme
    YouTube - Rise Lyrics

    Sentimental Theme
    YouTube - Yoko Kanno - MOON



    Rules:

    I will not stress any "rules" in particular, although please understand that the rules of this site are still important to uphold when posting. ​

    *Though I will not state any rules otherwise stated here, understand this: I will inform you politely if you do something I do disapprove of if the situation presents itself to either Rexzo or me. Please be appropriate in all senses of the word.*​

    Profile Template:

    Include all that you believe to be important. Either Rexzo or I will point out to you if we believe that you should include or eliminate something in your profile. Use your best judgment.​

    *I highly recommend posting a sample rp of your position requested in the thread along with your profile. Rexzo and I will provide ours and expect you to follow suit.*​

    Characters thus far:

    Destati: DESTATI
    Rexzo: Rexzo
    Airi: Destiny
    Hisui: Requiem
    Merlin: NPC
    Yen Sid: NPC
    Leon: NPC
    Yuffie: NPC
    Aerith: NPC
    Cid: NPC​

    (Please do not make up any characters until further notice...If you have an idea, please understand that it is just a suggestion and not necessarily something that will become apart of the story)​

    NEXT: AWAKENING OF THE SAGA
    (Where the story thus far will be told!)​











    Long, long ago....




    Before worlds populated the Realms of Light and Darkness and that In Between,

    All that existed was an eternal darkness....

    An abyss of darkness that held nothing....

    Not like the evils of the shadows to breed in the light,

    But of a nothingness, void of light...

    No realms existed....only one:

    One world that held a powerful heart at its core:

    KINGDOM HEARTS....

    This Heart was the only heart...

    The heart of this expanse, this abyss, of darkness....

    Embodied of light,

    The clash between the manifested light at the world's core...

    And the imposing hollow around....

    Pressed Kingdom Hearts....

    And then before breaking....

    The light was released into the darkness...

    And leaving Kingdom Hearts at the center of this,

    The light embodied in the heart of the united world...

    Created shifts in it, creating the Realms of Light and Darkness and then those In Between...

    Thus, in all realms, worlds were created from the life of Kingdom Hearts...

    Bound with this life force, time passed....

    Though united....the story is told of those with greed...

    Who corrupted their hearts and soon others....

    The manifestation of greed, hatred, and malice created darkness within their hearts...

    Therefore, the life force of Kingdom Hearts became split in the Realm of Light....

    And the worlds departed from their links with but little memory of the past....

    Though, the question is often avoided:

    Why did people turn to greed?

    Was it simply their nature....

    When they possessed hearts of the purest light?

    Most pure among the people,

    Were those of the Society of Light...

    They were ones not corrupted by the greed of others....

    The people respected them and honored them....

    Until they disappeared....

    To this day no one knows what had happened....

    They, those who wished to bind the worlds again,

    Left only the Princesses of Light...

    Those of pure hearts as well....

    Following the mystery, the world's became permanently separated...

    Until young heroes would attempt to bind them together again....

    The Princesses now fading like the Society of Light...

    And light also growing dimmer and dimmer....

    When will they awaken...

    And by doing so awaken the sleeping hearts of all worlds...

    Kingdom Hearts....

    This is the Everlasting Saga of the Door...

    Eternally binding when the worlds and their people separate....






    Blood In The Dark...



    The moon risen in the sky

    Casts an eerie glow of the light from all high...

    Never manifested in such a way...

    Old prophets and scribes gone;

    Unable to say...

    What of shadow's light in darkness, upon....

    .....

    Hurried footsteps patted the dark roads of Radiant Garden....Heavy breaths exhaled with worry and dismay...Rushing forth to a frustrated crowd cloaked in the shadows that held them in the night under the moon clouded over with the deepest of mists...

    One of the crowd spoke...

    So...The messenger has arrived...

    Another, a woman...

    What say he?

    ...Nothing....


    The words silently spoken...like a whisper....with not the message of great wisdom they had sought but wicked nothingness instead, eating away in the darkness at their cold, broken souls...

    Darkness grew amongst the crowd, grasping the light in a new age of teetering forces...

    Awestricken faces...lost in the shock...

    Then, like tears fallen from angels, their faces cast rain droplets from the heavens...hoping to purify their tainted hearts...

    The heavy rain grew....Pouring heavily....the rain water rushed into the drains as the people stood together but never farther apart in silence....along with blood rushing out likewise down the drain from a townsman stricken by the greed of another....the first death in cold blood vibrated within the silence....just like the words of those lost....lost like the purity of their own hearts....



    Past the days of Sora, Riku, and Kairi, the worlds are at peace with light lingering in between. The heroes of the past have become aged and retired waiting for new heroes to appear in the fold of light and darkness.​

    Long ago had keyblades been used....magic cast....hearts awoken....

    Only in his time....

    Now, the age of awakening was upon the worlds and their people....

    Rising or falling into light or the depths of darkness....

    How would the path be laid?
     
    Last edited: Nov 26, 2010
  2. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    Name:

    Destati

    This is the name of the Kingdom Hearts' song: "Dive Into The Heart". The name is Italian and means awoken or awaken.

    Theme:

    YouTube - Destati (Drammatica: The Very Best of Yoko Shimomura)

    Age:

    In appearance: 21....Actually, around the age of Ansem the Wise.

    Race:

    Human, Of the lineage of the royal line in Radiant Garden

    Nature:

    Philosophical, strong willed, understanding, moral

    Appearance:

    Having been kept eternally youthful from being born in the Realm of Darkness, Destati is shrouded in a darkness that prevents him from aging ever since returning to the Realm of Light. He has yellow, heartless eyes. Blackish brown hair like Leon's. Tall but thin, Destati wears a cloak of darkness similar to the Organization 13's. His essence is very mysterious and imposing; influential and unworldly.

    Abilities:

    For having lived so long in the Realm of Darkness, Destati used many powers similar to a Heartless but is also capable of wielding light but has been unable to exercise any control over the it in his heart for having been plunged in darkness.

    Weapon:

    Darkness and a shadow like sword created from killing his heartless mother.

    History:

    The young mother of the then only very curious, insightful Ansem prepared to bare another child, a brother to her only one so far. Being Queen of Radient Garden, the current atmosphere was nothing but apprehensive for another of the royal line of their prestigious family. The King had made some of the radicals of the time his adversaries without intentionally doing anything to spark a trench in the governance of the land, and so had placed his laboring wife in secrecy to give birth while he ruled the Garden as to not risk anything with the impulsive, wild foes of his in the land. The child could be the future ruler of Radiant Garden if the Garden's elders chose so. This is why much care was in place so that all would go smoothly as planned.

    The day she was in labor with her new son the air masked an intensity of possible rebellion and plots to overturn the land because of their suspicions of the radicals. Moments away from giving birth, the guards, worried of attacks from the rear of the base from Radiant Garden, lowered their protective routs around the base which contained barren deserts and deep forests. Therefore, when she needed them most, the inconceivable happened.

    From the opposite direction of the suspected attacks, a dark hand that had swept the land in silence that day had called forth the shadows to do its biding. The Heartless, at that time completely unknown for the most part, invaded the base. Killing all the guards, there was no one left to protect the Queen and her coming child.

    Mercilessly, the Heartless devoured her right before giving birth to her last son, thus creating another heartless in the process. Though, through his royal lineage and natural heart of light, the boy as if by fate was left with his heart, yet absorbed nonetheless by darkness.

    The womb made Heartless offered itself as the portal the unborn boy was forced to take, leaving the Realm of Light within the abyss as the Door to the Realm of Darkness. Within the womb still of his mother in this new land, hope was beyond the shadow born child but fear was primal and intact in the dark clutches.

    Born within darkness but of a light appearing incorruptible, spared by the love in his mother's heart, the boy was forced to embrace darkness within the womb and then violently depart from it, ripping from the insides of his heartless mother out into the Realm of Darkness, then born. Being still young, the boy lay there shivering, but when his mother closed in hoping to devour a young heart still early, yellow eyes similar to a heartless' flashed and dark claws retaliated in a struggle, still covered in shadows. Overtaking the heartless attacker, the boy lay there again in fear.

    Much time would pass, as he would wonder deeply the meaning of things and of his own solitary life. Seeking light in a world of darkness, the boy became older and wiser and learned to control the darkness. Though of light, he also understood innately its importance in the heart. Wandering to see the light beyond, the youthful brother, unaware of his royal heritage and of his family, learned much of the existence of the heart and of darkness and the realm that held it.

    Fate lent itself to him when Yen Sid, eager to discover the mysteries behind Kingdom Hearts opened a door to the Realm of Darkness. In meditating the mysteries of the heart of all worlds, Yen Sid thought that he must be able to capture for a moment the embodiment of light within it to which he could use to create a pathway from the Realm of Light to the Realm of Darkness. Though, Kingdom Hearts lay too deep for him to feel it and he had much trouble doing so.

    The wanderer, as if guided by destiny, reached the far depths of the Realm of Darkness after twenty years. Standing before the white door, he touched it and the touch itself vibrated across the universe from the Realm of Darkness to the Realm of Light. Sensing this small touch allowed Yen Sid to sense the presence of Kingdom Hearts which enabled him to muster his spells to create a portal of sorts, exploiting that presence to enter the Realm of Darkness.

    Though, the portal he created was not to be found...Meanwhile, in the Realm of Darkness appeared something unusual. The touch had sent the essence of the worlds in darkness and in light which combined themselves in his heart. The touch sent one word from his fingertips up to his mouth...

    Like a breath it came,

    "DESTATI!"

    And, so the man became named as such. Destati turned around, sensing something and saw a door of light appear, waiting in luminance. Walking forward was futile before the awe inspiring sight. Living in a world of darkness, the light expanded and then nothing.

    Wakening, Destati plunged into nothingness....Suddenly, light manifested around him and he came to be engulfed in white doves. Opening his eyes again, Destati saw that he stood now upon a glass surface, surrounded by an ethereal nothing that exuded everything. Wondering where he was, white stairs appeared before him farther into that nothingness. Walking upon them, he looked back to see the glass surface again. Darkness surrounded a heart of light with someone within it. Not being able to understand who, Destati turned back and walked up the stair further. A light seemed to become clearer and clearer until he saw a Door to the Light further ahead. The stairs seemed to disappear slowly and then Destati was taken in, falling upwards into the Door to the Realm of Light....​
     
  3. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    Um... you could have put all of those three posts into your first one. Please have a moderator merge them. I will join but you should still put up a template example as to what you really are looking for.

    Name: Yen Sid
    Age: ???
    Gender:
    Personality: Stern but very concern with everyone he cares for and put trusts in them. Knowledged in most aspects of light and darkness.
    Valuable Object: hat and the Star Shard
    Role: Mentor, Retired Keyblade Master, Sorcerer

    Theme: YouTube - magical mystery EXTENDED kingdom hearts 2.wmv

    Weapon: Don't always use a weapon since he retired as a keyblade wielder but he controls magic, a staff and he may use the Star Seeker at any point and time.
    Abilities: Have control over Divination and other arts of magic. Is capable of D-Linking and can have the power to upgrade or teach his apprentices in any field of magic. Also can change into drive forms.

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    History: Yen Sid started to feel that his time were to come after the events of Kingdom Hearts. He started to take on many actions and try to find someone who is worthy of watching over the realms of light and darkness once he pass away. Being the only one in the universe with details on the keyblade, hearts, darkness and light, he hope that he will be able to find the right apprentice who is worthy of taking on his honor and to make sure that the balance is maintained. He is not sure as to whether someone would try to repeat past events bu he is determined to make sure that extra precaution will be activated under his orders. He knows that the pat will be long and hard but will anyone else will know?
     
  4. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    I will read this later.
     
  5. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    Firstly, I am glad that you are interested in what I and Rexzo have produced.

    Although, I would like to defend my position as the poster of those three trailers if you will and assert that I posted those three separately for understandable reasons but nonetheless evidently unclear to you. I posted them individually to show their unique purposes just like how a movie or video game portrays many sides to itself with an array of trailers. In the same way, it would have been unwise for me to have posted them together.

    Secondly, if you had read my reasoning, I chose not to post a template because I wished to weed out the unskilled and inexperienced. By requiring those interested to think of what most important to include in their profiles, I created an efficient means of separating those who know how to follow the rules and those who can think outside the box and produce something from the creative corners of their minds. I want people to think; not to follow.

    Again, as glad as I may be for your consideration, I wish to stress the intentions of what I have here produced. I edited the first post to convey these intentions better for your and along with you others' betterment. I hereby deny your request for Yen Side on the premise that he be a secondary character: one that can be controlled by anyone. Actually, in fact, I admit to having put his name along with Merlin's sooner than I should have for he was to be a key part in the beginning and what Rexzo and I believed to be apart of the story rarely.

    So, just to be clear, I encourage you to follow along, and at this time, see the story unfold. As much as I would like to hear your ideas as well as with anyone else's, Rexzo and I plan to lay out the story and then post characters that would have to be added before continuing. We do not hope to have that many people on board with this but rather some, highly dedicated, skilled persons to aid in the story line.

    I hope that this clarifies things for you and everyone else.
     
  6. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    I said that the posts need to be merged only because what you did can be seen as triple posting, which can be seen as breaking the rules or as spam. I understand what you mean but to others, you are just doing this for your own beneficial for vbexp points or just there to spam.

    If you want Yen Sid and Merlin to be controlled by anyone, then they are better off as NPC's. Just throwing them on to the characters that you need are seen as though they are needed as supporting characters. They are really not needed if they are just there to be used by anyone. I just saw Secondary as a alternate way of saying as a supporting character but at least you have made it a bit more clearer.

    If you are still in the process of completing the OOC, then by all means, go on ahead but make sure that you make this more specific this time.
     
  7. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    Okay I understand. I will change their status to "NPC" so that their position in the story is better understood. I will keep your advice in mind as well for the future(Double, triple posting ect). Thank you.
     
  8. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    Destati, you are officially my second favorite (active) member on this site. May I make up a character? From what I understand, you don't want any original characters, though I could have read that wrong.
     
  9. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    I am extremely flattered, and I don't say that to many people. You may make up a character, although I cannot guarantee that your creation will be accepted by both Rexzo and myself. I will take deep consideration of whatever you produce and will attempt to involve you in some way. Although, just to clarify, even when accepted(if you are)I cannot say for sure whether you will make your way immediately into the story. Please also write a sample rp involving your character.

    I will pm you with my thoughts if I see a way in which your character may be involved later in the story as to not spoil things for others. Thank you.

    Dimensional Breach: An upgrade of her reality traveling spell. It allows her to move through dimensions.

    Sample:



    Character Two: I have yet to update this profile for generalized use, let alone RP with it. But here you go:
    Owner: HawkZero

    Nobody's Name: Talexari Sasi

    Somebody's Name: Saria Isalet

    Home World: London (Peter Pan the Second movie)

    Gender: Female
    Age: Was in her mid-20's before her heart was stolen.
    Hair: Was 'ginger', but now is a light shade of blue. Think A tiny bit darker than sky blue. It's short-cropped because it keeps it easy to maintain.
    Eye Color: Brown, almost tan/sandy brown but not quite.
    Skin tone: Pale, European skin tone.
    Height: 5' 6"
    Weight/Body Type: 141 lbs. Most muscular in her upper body, her legs are not those of a runner. A fairly thin build, medium frame. She holds herself in a very confident manner.

    Description of attire: A 1920's mechanic's uniform, complete with a repairman's cap.
    Accessories/Distinguishing marks: None to be spoken of, aside from a small gear she had turned into a necklace. The necklace is connected by the teeth on two sides of the gear, rather than through the middle. Speaks in a cockney accent

    Likes: Money, and lots of it. Her creations. Rather hedonistically driven.
    Dislikes: Poverty, those that would disregard her because of her profession

    Personality: She is strong-headed and stubborn, often supporting a cocky or even rebellious attitude.

    Bio:
    Saria Isalet was a metal welder. A junker. An artist of scrap. She was damn good at it too. But, as any human would, she got tired of doing the same old thing. And what with the war, she was low on supplies for her art and money for living - nobody had the money to buy anything. Saria wanted more out of life than poverty - power, money, anything would be better! And then she met the heartless - and saw them take a man's heart out of his chest in the night, and she watched as the body turned into a Dusk. The creatures intrigued her greatly. And so, she gave her heart to the heartless willingly. . . In her mind, Saria knew that she wouldn't become like that man had. And so she didn't. It is her greatest strength, and most powerful weakness. . .

    Weaknesses: Obviously, her stubbornness is a key weakness. Elemental and weapon weaknesses and strengths are listed below.
    Strengths:

    Element(power): Iron
    Weapon Type: Er, miscellaneous?
    Weapon Name: Quicksilver

    Weapons: A simple, perfectly shaped metal orb with eight floating (corporeal, metal) symbols with the OI sign on them. The symbols have the ability no multiply to the extent of which Sasi can focus on them. Also, the orb can be molded into the shape that she needs at the moment, such as an armguard or a metal claw. But, when not in use, the orb is either a cane, with the symbols floating around Sasi, or the orb is floating directly above her head and the symbols doing the same as previously stated. The symbols(I need a new word XP) take on whatever shape she wants, but they must be no larger than a square foot at any time. The larger they are, the more brittle the pieces. She can make up to seven hundred on her best days, but they are extremely or impossibly hard to control - due to the fact that these symbols are controlled via thought, At the minimum amount and slightly above that, they are controlled with instinct. But, . At default she is with eight and in battle she has fifty. The pieces are flat enough that she normally uses them together as a whip, but she can pretty much control them completely as long as they are in a five yard radius. Any further and physics takes its natural course. These weapons, while in her radius, ignore normal physics in the sense of gravity and magnetism. There can only be a minimum of right symbols at any given time. She can use these things to augment her elemental abilities by using these to support her creations to an extent. As for iron, she has the typical 'control element' abilities. However here are strict restrictions to what she can do. One, she can't "Detect" iron from afar. She can only change the shape and form of metal if she is in contact with it at the current moment. If there are consecutive pieces of metal touching each other, say, a bunch of paperclips in a jar, then Sasi can affect all of them. When she uses this power, however, it is not exempt from the normal laws of physics. There is no way to 'levitate' them in midair, and if she wants to use one as a sword she will have to deal with the weight.

    Sample: Give me time for this one, if at all.

    ]Name:??? "Finch" Jericho

    Age: 12

    Race: Hume

    Gender: Female

    Alignment: Chaotic - herself

    Weapon: Blue mana that she channels into a weapon form.

    Abilities:
    Blue Charge – Gathers the mana around her in an undefined shape, just floating there ready to be used. The most the unused mana can do is just soften the blows of objects flying at her, like a curtain is hanging in the way.
    Periwinkle Guard –A plain defensive technique. Uses the mana to create a shield in whatever form is required
    Royal Shot – A sphere ranging in size from the size of a marble to a bowling ball is created and thrown. It is self-guiding and makes an explosion on impact.
    Cerulean Blade – Generates a sword (Defined by Finch) out of the mana. Cuts anyone that isn’t Finch.
    Marine Star – At its most powerful state, this technique produces a six pointed glaive (Star) to throw. Also can create other throwing stars of many varieties.
    Indigo Ballista* – A lance of mana is formed and shot forward.

    Physical Description: Blue butterflies. 193 by *emperpep on deviantART

    Personality: Bratty, foulmouthed girl.

    History: - This has to be reconfigured for this RP, please hold

    Sample: Also another character that I haven't really had the chance to play.[/QUOTE]

    I will take a look, so just wait around for me please if you have the time of course.
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Nov 21, 2010
  10. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    Wonderful. All conversations reaped and sown in equal measure.
     
  11. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    Dimensional Breach: An upgrade of her reality traveling spell. It allows her to move through dimensions.

    I have no desire to know what your character can do. Knowing some things and certain affinities helps me to better create the plot, although I want your character to be presented with their abilities revealed as the story progresses. That makes a good story.

    Sample:

    This guy won't see me com- WOAH!

    The shot had gotten Malisa off-guard, true. Even though she had all her mirrors focused on the pillar where she knew he was hidden, he still managed to get a shot on her without any warning. The witch reacted as quickly as possible. After the shot hit and passed through, the dummy froze in place as if a stop spell were used on it. A noticeable rip (not a cut) in the flesh was in view, but then a bright flash of light exploding where it was showed it to be repaired. The fake, now adjusting the shield to be in front of her, began a steady march towards the pillar Glyde was last seen. Malisa adjusted her mirrors to include a wide view of the left side and a wide view of the right side. She would not be caught off-guard again. Whenever a shot would be fired, the witch would just repeat the process. Rip, flash, heal. Rip, flash, heal. So long as Glyde kept wasting energy, then she was safe.

    Though, Malisa had to prepare for a surprise attack. So, still within the confines of her safe-zone, she summoned two unactivated circles to her front. The first (Reflective spell), closest to her, was large enough in diameter to include her entire body. The second (Blast spell), about half the size of the first in diameter, was located directly in front of the first.

    Not today. I won't lose. . .

    I would try using third person so that your character can interact more effectively with other characters. Also, I think you may be a more vivid writer that way. Just try to work on letting the reader sense what you are presenting to them.

    I will let you take the advice given thus far to make any changes you wish to do for the character above and as well to the character below. Try to take everything said under consideration. Think of authenticity.

    Character Two: I have yet to update this profile for generalized use, let alone RP with it. But here you go:
    Owner: HawkZero

    Nobody's Name: Talexari Sasi

    Somebody's Name: Saria Isalet

    Home World: London (Peter Pan the Second movie)

    Gender: Female
    Age: Was in her mid-20's before her heart was stolen.
    Hair: Was 'ginger', but now is a light shade of blue. Think A tiny bit darker than sky blue. It's short-cropped because it keeps it easy to maintain.
    Eye Color: Brown, almost tan/sandy brown but not quite.
    Skin tone: Pale, European skin tone.
    Height: 5' 6"
    Weight/Body Type: 141 lbs. Most muscular in her upper body, her legs are not those of a runner. A fairly thin build, medium frame. She holds herself in a very confident manner.

    Description of attire: A 1920's mechanic's uniform, complete with a repairman's cap.
    Accessories/Distinguishing marks: None to be spoken of, aside from a small gear she had turned into a necklace. The necklace is connected by the teeth on two sides of the gear, rather than through the middle. Speaks in a cockney accent

    Likes: Money, and lots of it. Her creations. Rather hedonistically driven.
    Dislikes: Poverty, those that would disregard her because of her profession

    Personality: She is strong-headed and stubborn, often supporting a cocky or even rebellious attitude.

    Bio:
    Saria Isalet was a metal welder. A junker. An artist of scrap. She was damn good at it too. But, as any human would, she got tired of doing the same old thing. And what with the war, she was low on supplies for her art and money for living - nobody had the money to buy anything. Saria wanted more out of life than poverty - power, money, anything would be better! And then she met the heartless - and saw them take a man's heart out of his chest in the night, and she watched as the body turned into a Dusk. The creatures intrigued her greatly. And so, she gave her heart to the heartless willingly. . . In her mind, Saria knew that she wouldn't become like that man had. And so she didn't. It is her greatest strength, and most powerful weakness. . .

    Weaknesses: Obviously, her stubbornness is a key weakness. Elemental and weapon weaknesses and strengths are listed below.
    Strengths:

    Element(power): Iron
    Weapon Type: Er, miscellaneous?
    Weapon Name: Quicksilver

    Weapons: A simple, perfectly shaped metal orb with eight floating (corporeal, metal) symbols with the OI sign on them. The symbols have the ability no multiply to the extent of which Sasi can focus on them. Also, the orb can be molded into the shape that she needs at the moment, such as an armguard or a metal claw. But, when not in use, the orb is either a cane, with the symbols floating around Sasi, or the orb is floating directly above her head and the symbols doing the same as previously stated. The symbols(I need a new word XP) take on whatever shape she wants, but they must be no larger than a square foot at any time. The larger they are, the more brittle the pieces. She can make up to seven hundred on her best days, but they are extremely or impossibly hard to control - due to the fact that these symbols are controlled via thought, At the minimum amount and slightly above that, they are controlled with instinct. But, . At default she is with eight and in battle she has fifty. The pieces are flat enough that she normally uses them together as a whip, but she can pretty much control them completely as long as they are in a five yard radius. Any further and physics takes its natural course. These weapons, while in her radius, ignore normal physics in the sense of gravity and magnetism. There can only be a minimum of right symbols at any given time. She can use these things to augment her elemental abilities by using these to support her creations to an extent. As for iron, she has the typical 'control element' abilities. However here are strict restrictions to what she can do. One, she can't "Detect" iron from afar. She can only change the shape and form of metal if she is in contact with it at the current moment. If there are consecutive pieces of metal touching each other, say, a bunch of paperclips in a jar, then Sasi can affect all of them. When she uses this power, however, it is not exempt from the normal laws of physics. There is no way to 'levitate' them in midair, and if she wants to use one as a sword she will have to deal with the weight.

    Sample: Give me time for this one, if at all.

    ]Name:??? "Finch" Jericho

    Age: 12

    Race: Hume

    Gender: Female

    Alignment: Chaotic - herself

    Weapon: Blue mana that she channels into a weapon form.

    Abilities:
    Blue Charge – Gathers the mana around her in an undefined shape, just floating there ready to be used. The most the unused mana can do is just soften the blows of objects flying at her, like a curtain is hanging in the way.
    Periwinkle Guard –A plain defensive technique. Uses the mana to create a shield in whatever form is required
    Royal Shot – A sphere ranging in size from the size of a marble to a bowling ball is created and thrown. It is self-guiding and makes an explosion on impact.
    Cerulean Blade – Generates a sword (Defined by Finch) out of the mana. Cuts anyone that isn’t Finch.
    Marine Star – At its most powerful state, this technique produces a six pointed glaive (Star) to throw. Also can create other throwing stars of many varieties.
    Indigo Ballista* – A lance of mana is formed and shot forward.

    Physical Description: Blue butterflies. 193 by *emperpep on deviantART

    Personality: Bratty, foulmouthed girl.

    History: - This has to be reconfigured for this RP, please hold

    Sample: Also another character that I haven't really had the chance to play.[/QUOTE]

    Oh, and by the way, I probably wouldn't have spent so much time giving you advice and my opinions if you hadn't shown your clear potential and your many ideas here. I am impressed nonetheless, though I see as well how you may improve.

    Okay. I have to be honest: what you have is good, but I really, through thinking about it, don't want such a well established character nor any other. This is purely because I think that I wish most to see characters grow with the story, and yours may not be able to do that.

    I don't discourage you from becoming involved, but I stress the importance of freshness and opportunity. Your character seems as though this is a side note in her adventures. I don't mind including characters like that as long as they are kept mysterious and somewhat secondary.

    Though actually, I would prefer you to think up a whole new character that could be involved that has less of a back story. In that way, you can establish potential and describe growth throughout the journey.

    So, I deny any character you or really anyone presents that is already well developed and wishes to become a main character. I want new. If anything, your character can be among the likes of Yen Sid, Merlin, Cid, Yuffie, Leon, and others who share little of their past but are involved nonetheless with Sora's story. That way, I would tell you of when your character can become involved. Although, again I encourage you to make a fresh new character for THIS story.

    Thank you.
     
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  12. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    So does that mean Sasi and Jericho are rejected as well?
     
  13. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    Well, Requiem, based on my response, would you reject them? Remember that I want something new. If you feel that your characters are inspiring, fresh, and new, then please put the finishing touches needed, and I will take a look at them soon enough once you tell me you are done.
     
  14. Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    This looks like a place to go out on a limb, and try something different. Like you've said, DESTATI, all about starting fresh. So that, I will do.
     
  15. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    A challenge, say you? Accept says I! I shall have something so fresh that Alternian slam poets will act like this shit has divorced from the handle.

    I'll have something, hopefully by the end of the week.

    EDIT: I'm deleting some of my earlier posts so that they aren't taking up so much room. I suggest you do the same, Destati - except with the tidbit about fresh and new.
     
  16. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    I am very glad another has stressed his interest in the story and hope that you think up something creative and prove influential to the development of what I have here. I am truly very excited.

    And, by the way, you don't have to struggle with the formalities of capitalizing my name and such(like it is too much of a hassle anyways); please call me Anthony.

    Oh, inverted control you have in manipulating basic syntax! Rare are the few who can do that!

    Take your time in the thought process. I can wait, although in many ways I can't as well!

    Thank you. I appreciate it and have thought of doing the same thing myself. Though I must stress as well that, likewise, you may call me Anthony. I do not wish to continue with the social boundaries associated with pseudonyms and believe that understanding the similar humanity behind a computer screen and behind a name offers much more potential for success and for good feelings than would mere obscurity and illusion.
     
  17. Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    This character WILL play some where. Maybe this place aint dead yet.


    Name: Raishuzu Kirioke
    Age: 25
    Gender: Male
    Side: He allies with the side of good.
    Appearance:
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    Yes he does wear a lot of kimonos. He can utilize a special door to travel from place to place. It looks like the senkaimon from bleach.
    History: Raishuzu was born in a rather large city back in the eighties. His family was big on mystical things that people couldn't explain. When his back ground got out in school you can imagine how far down the ladder he went. After his first year of high school he began to exhibit signs of being able to use magic, and eventually became a spell caster. After graduation he became a wanderer, going about the world doing odd jobs. Now he is a powerful spell user who tends towards defending others than attacking. He thinks of himself not as a detective, but more of a scholar of strange unexplainable things.

    Abilitys: Raishuzu is not a man who tends towards physical combat, but instead uses magic to both attack and defend. He draws signs in the air to enact his spells, and he also keeps several "Items" on his person for times when speed, not finesse, are required. Just about everything he keeps on himself is able to create some type of spell. As for his real magic, the signs he draws are from a ancient language that only few remember. The symbols do not so much say a spell so much as describe it. Each symbol represents an aspect, and through their combination names are formed to give something substance. The symbols, when drawn, are silver in color, and merge together to form the spell he chooses. When in use, a large magic circle appears beneath him.

    This type of magic is not very taxing as it is the art of creation, and thus draws on the power of the world itself. It is one of the more powerful schools of magic, rivaling merlons abilities, but is slow in nature to use.

    Element: He could none of the elements, or all of them. As he is a user of creation magic it is pointless to try and pin down his powers with any one element.

    Skills: Aside from his magic, he is a practitioner of martial arts. While he doesn't use it often, it helps him with dodging a foes techniques.

    Weapons: Aside from his fists, most of what he wears has some type of ward or enchantment placed on them. These are mainly used for defense, but he has a ring that assembles a spirit sword he can use to cleanse dark foes. It's especially effective against heartless.

    Other Traits: Aside from being a top notch spell caster, Raishuzu is also a incredible cook. He is a calm, quiet person who doesn't mind listening to other peoples problems. From there he suggests things that the person could do to alleviate these problems. Aside from that he knows a lot about other cultures and places since he is a well traveled man.

    Personality: Calm, and collected, he occasionally makes jokes with friends. He has made many friends over the years, and not all of them are human. The spirits know of him, and he has befriended some of them. He can be seen as fierce in battle, and he tends to explain his enemies major fault while dealing the finishing blow.
     
  18. Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    Name: Lydia de Fyora
    Gender: Female
    Age: 13

    Appearance
    Standing just less than five feet tall and having a light mocha colored complexion, Lydia teems with the radiance that only a young one have. She is not particularly tough by her appearance, though not really meek or feeble; tender, or otherwise, unhardened would better suit her in that regard. Notably, she is a bit on the smaller side when it comes to build, such that she comes off as little to no threat upon sight. Her figure, otherwise, is as any girl her age, being nearing on the threshold of physical maturity.

    Facially, she seems almost babyish, but that’s partly do to her ‘eternally’ softer, gentler expressions. Her eyes are a of a slightly darkened palm green, matching perfectly with the trees of her home world; they also appear to take up a rather large portion of her face, being that they are commonly wide in amazement. Her hair is generally neatly kept, brown in color falling well passed her shoulders. She prefers to wear it down, to let it ‘be free.’ It is rarely seen without her trademarked flower sticking out, tucked just behind her ear like a carpenter’s pencil. ​

    Personality:
    You were expecting maybe one of those morbidly dark teenagers, who somehow know the real joys and pains of the world? Sorry to disappoint you then, Mr. Dark. Lydia takes in the world around her in the purest of lights. Her mind is oblivious, on all accounts, to the dangers that the worlds could bring upon a person. Hence she approaches everything with even less than a first thought about it. Unbridled in her desire to see and explore what’s there to be found, she just seems to keep going about her adventurous ways. Oddly, this persona is capped off by a spontaneous attention span, causing her to drift amongst many different subjects of interest without fully thinking any of them through in one sitting. ​

    Abilities:
    She is blessed by nothing more than one, undying word that has always been the term for a human: potential. Not that she’s a prodigy or anything ridiculous like that. She is no more capable or incapable than any other her age, but right within that threshold where the powers that some can only dream about could be a certain reality for her, if only she can find it in herself to settle down in a single process long enough to actually pick up the proficiency. ​

    Historical Outlook:
    Lydia was born into a middle rung family on the humble world of Destiny Islands. As an only child, her lifestyle was somewhat of a pampered one. It wasn’t, however, pampered in the traditional sense of the word. In essence, hers was a pampering that was nothing more than the infinite attention to her well-being and development as an individual. As early as age four her parents were working towards making her a well rounded, knowledge seeking individual, one whose mind was stimulated, and who might someday yearn for greater expansion of her own experiences. Basically, they wanted their only daughter to be one of the finest minds that the worlds could have.

    Their efforts, however, proved to be half in vein. They did indeed manage to present a wide array of knowledge and interests to Lydia, but the plan wasn’t executed very well. Their efforts, if anything, were too forceful, too desperate, and on the whole, pushed in too rapid a pace, such that there was little time for Lydia to fully immerse herself into anything in particular. As Lydia would be just beginning to delve into one bit of information, her parents would quickly deem her “seasoned” in whatever matter it pertained to. Just as quickly would they pull away the one item, and immediately place something else before her for speculation. It was this process that they felt effective and conductive.

    Yet the child that they had so deeply sought to be the bearer of great wisdom, wide interests, and endless focus, would crumble before their very eyes. Lydia would NOT grow up into their dreams, but into something roughly the opposite of that. For their credit, she had developed a wide range of interests, and a massively speculative take on the world around her, one that aligned perfectly with a person fit to learn. However, Lydia’s interests and curiosities were anything but focused. She had grown to be short in focus. No sooner after taking in something, she would tire of it, and wander away from it in the light of something new to wrap her mind around.

    Eventually, Lydia would come to realize that her parents had pretty much shown her everything there was to be shown on the Islands. They had even shown her the old ‘secret place,’ carved into the heart of the island where she used to play and explore in her younger days. But there did remain one thing that left her mystified and pondering: a door, oddly built into the cave that was known as the ‘secret place.’ Her parents had told her the story as other islanders had told it, that the door had once been opened, and that it proved to become, albeit unsavory a method, a gateway that lead some of the islanders to other worlds.

    By age 13, her wonderment with the door to other worlds had seen its peak, and she boldly (or brashly) acted upon it. In the midst of a clear night, her parents tucked into a deep slumber, she gathered together a carrying pack of necessities (being extra clothing, some food for the trip, and a few choice valuables to remind her of home, if she ever thought of it again). Her mind, for once in her life, set, she left but a single lined note for her parents to go by, believing that they wouldn’t worry so long as they knew where she was going. In light, hasty, chicken scratched writing, she left these words upon a notepad:

    “Gone to open the door. Love Lydia.”

    She departed then, rowing a boat swiftly across the channel to the playing island.​


    Hopefully this is something you will find well and in order. The character is fresh, essentially a stripped down version of something bigger that I had had planned out. It might be that I can develop it as I had initially intended to present it, though that is easily sacrificed for what this RP might offer to the character.
     
  19. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    I will check these requests out sometime this weekend as soon as possible. Please be patient and feel free to make any necessary changes before I get to them.

    I will extremely recommend posting a sample rp. Despite your notoriety here on the site, I would greatly appreciate one from the two of you, so that I know what to expect. Thank you.
     
  20. Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    Is a fresh post (featuring our submitted character) preferred for the sample?
     

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