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Life in the Shadows- OOC and SU

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Destiny, May 5, 2010.

  1. I edited the history.
     
  2. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Ok I'd like to have one more character for government, then we need king of darkness to make his character and we'll start it then.


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    EDIT- Here's the actual RP, we should be fine I think on characters, I'd like to get more for government and Shadows, but no more Knights.

    http://kh-3.net/forums/original-idealist-roleplays/7834-life-shadows.html
     
    Last edited by a moderator: May 16, 2010
  3. RebelMurf

    RebelMurf Hero of the Wild

    Name - Vincent Reid

    Age - Its unknown weather Vince is older or younger than his brother.

    Human or Super Human - Super Human.

    Side - Shadows

    Powers - Shadow. This is a power that most members of the Shadows have, however, Vincent's is a lot more powerful. When he can use his shadow, he can jump from one shadow to another. When really concentrating he can use this power on another causing them to jump shadows. Vincent's second power is the opposite of his brothers. Instead of slowing down time, his power allows him to speed up. This added with Alex's power can cause a major problem for there enemy.

    Weapon - [​IMG]

    Appearance - [​IMG]

    [​IMG]

    Personality - Vincent has quite a relaxed personality. Like his brother he won't attack unless provoked or your his enemy. He generally enjoys what he does.

    History/ Bio - Vincent has the same history as Alex. However he goes into more detail about his. From Alex's bio we learned that the two brothers were inseparable. The two had developed several fighting techniques together. They had learned many fighting styles and soon became champions in many tournaments. Unfortunately for the brothers life didn't get any easier. Instead of people leaving them alone like they had hoped, more people came to them to try and prove how good of a fighter they were. One day things had gotten way out of hand and the brothers were in a fight for the lives. It was then that they discovered there powers. There powers saved there lives that day, however it got the attention of some odd people who wanted to use the boys. As things got more and more difficult for the two they left there home town in search of a more peaceful existence. After a lot of travelling the brothers found themselves in New York. They thought they had found there peace. However, they were wrong. When there powers were discovered they were given a choice by the government, allow them to experiment on them to try remove the gene that gave them there power, or joining the knights. A band of super humans forced to live in hiding only coming out in secret to protect the world. The brothers felt that they shouldn't be discriminated against because they are different from the others. They refused the governments offer and destroyed the government facility to express there feelings about there options. It was then that the brothers started the Shadows. A band of super humans who would one day rule the world so they would no longer have to live in the shadows as outcasts.

    Other - Vince and Alex have both got a strong grudge against the government for the options they were given. They have nothing against the Knights but they will fight them and destroy them if it gets them what they want. Also he rarely uses his guns. They are usually hidden.
     
    Last edited: May 18, 2010
  4. Abyssal Knight

    Abyssal Knight I step back into the light of...

    hey ill possibly join....can i be a knight or a Shadow?
     
  5. Zero

    Zero ♫♪♫Dear☺God♫♪♫

    I think she said we have enough Knights for now, so it have to be government or the shadows :)
     
  6. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Knights are closed, and if you do Shadow, you're going to be the last one in(also you speak to KoD outside of the site, mind telling him to make his profile and stuff)

    If preferancly though, I'd prefer if you created a government/ S.H.O.T character because we have 3, 2 by blademasterfan, and 1 by me. Blademasterfan won't be back until this summer or real active to post until than, so there's just me for government.

    So this goes to everyone, that we need government characters.
     
  7. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    is it too late for me to join? Really don't want to be bored.
     
  8. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    You can join, and I sure hope you've changed your RP'ing style from the last time I saw you RP'ing, we need decent RP'ers here or people who want to become good RP'ers and will try to, none of this god mod, powerplay junk, and none of that girly girl crap, I'm sort of not in the mood for that and it'll destroy the RP.
     
  9. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    Nah. I'm more into power-hungry crazy characters and I almost always roleplay as female characters. I've changed though but only because I ended up taking up your strict personality and ended up acting the same way to the newer members the way you acted towards me and because I actually wanted a change and ended up maturing. Anyways, is it ok for me to have 3 characters in the government? I only need three and that's all I need.




    Name- Pridella
    Age- 26?
    Human
    Side: government
    Powers: None
    Weapon- Carries a long sword filled with electricity that can break into two and she carries a gun. She also carries a memory chip inside her sword that allows her to change battle form, Eryu and Manes. ​

    Appearence[​IMG]

    Personality:She's very prideful but she tends to have split personality disorders.
    History/ Bio: Pridella is not really from new york City but she was born from the coast of London, England. She was born in August 16, 1975.
    During her eight years of living there, her parents was trying to find some more money and a decent way of living so they moved back to the United States. Living there and studying there for twelve years, she was working as handmaidens for a couple of companies. While studying and getting jobs in America, she ended up in an accident that ended up in a result that stated of several humans that started the incident. She then had a lost term memory but was also was displaying a side of bipolar disorders and a power of immense strength. She then was hired to work with the government, stating that her parents was assumed to be killed off. She now works to try and get rid of all people who, to her, are diseases
    Others: Part of the Three Maidens group within the S.H.O.T.
     
    Last edited: May 19, 2010
  10. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    not accepted.

    First off, I don't know any sword in today's technology that can turn into two guns

    Second off, For once can you be a guy and not so much a girl, you tend to make me mad then

    Third off, my mom was born many years after the cold war, I highly doubt your character's parents were around in 1914 if she was born in 1975, a resonable year her parents would have been born would have been in the 1950's, late 1940's.

    Fourth off, she can't be half human, not even the super humans are half human, they're all human with just a gene mutation to give them powers

    Fifth off, more religious stuff, for once I'd like a RP in which your not completely full religous and stuff, everyone understand you're huge about christianity and stuff, but you don't need to make it all you talk about and do 24/7.

    Sixth off, history error, World War I and II were fought in Europe(and Japan during WWII) England was in WWI before the U.S., same goes for WWII, meaning they'd probably would have been fighting with England to aid in the war.

    Seventh off, split personality also tends to be called bipolar

    So you need a completely whole new character.


    EDIT: And three maidens of SHOT? Never have I heard the word maiden be used, I've heard of union, but never ever maiden.
     
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  11. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    ??? Where in the world do you see where I put some things in my character's template with something religious? I would appreciate if people would stop thinking that I put something down religious when I didn't. If there's something that you thought I put down something religious, at least point it out where you think I put something down instead of just saying that I'm making my character religious. A lot has changed when you was gone. It frustrates me when religion is brought up or when someone try to say that I'm trying to say something religious in a thread and things gets out of hand when I start speaking out my mind.
    XD I forgot to put down that she carry a gun. Her sword don't become a gun. Her sword is actually one sword that can break into two. My bad. -_- I hate roleplaying as male characters. Just don't work right and I roleplayed as the males more than the females back then.

    XD I just put down that people want to say that she's a half-human but that doesn't mean that she is one. Just a rumor that people started for her.That's why I still put down human above the side information. As for the history error, I can change that around. I'll just say World War II for her parents. As for the "Three Maiden" group part, I just went and made that name up for my three characters since they will be together througout the roleplay. I just want to bring something at least amusing or something that don't make any sense.

    I've changed my template around for Pridella so check the template now. XD This is what I meant by I'm not being specific about my characters.
     
    Last edited: May 19, 2010
  12. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    I'll intervene here.

    World War II is STILL too old. If they fought in World War II at a minimum age at of 18, they'd be about 50 by the time that she was born. And by religion, I think KS is referring to the "Impure fleshes full of Sin" part. Also, "Bringing Someething that doesn't make sense to an RP" is bullshit, to be quite frank. And it wouldn't kill you to play a male character ONCE IN A WHILE. Here, I'll make this easy for you and give you the link to the first step in a guide to character creation.

    Character Creation Guide Pt 1 by ~Sheeply on deviantART

    If you can't see it, make an account on Deviantart and sign up. I takes two minutes and it's worth your time. Especially since you claim that you "Don't want to be bored". There are more links to the other steps of the guide in the description below the picture.

    EDIT: And there is still no reason that she should be rumored to be "Half-Human". If I understand this correctly, this RP has no half-humans. It works like the Supers are just random mutantations in the DNA and there is no corellation through bloodline.
     
  13. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    ??? Just because I put down "Impure fleshes of sin" does not mean that I'm doing this to make this religious. Well, I think putting down a name that does not make any sense is ok even though if it is shitty. Plus, her parents would be around the age of 45 by the time she'll be born so I didn't think that middle aged people having a child would be that bad even though it's not common at that age span. I would also like to state that I put a question mark next to her age, showing that it's not really her real age.

    Edit: For some reason, the words won't pop up here at the school so I have to do this at the library or at home if my computer has booted back up. I put down human down there for her to show that she's completely human regardless of what her other information part says about people making rumors about her. I can take it out if it will cause a problem but she is not to even be like a super human.
     
    Last edited: May 19, 2010
  14. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    It doesn't matter SB, quit arguing about it. You wonder why people get mad because you're the one who breaks out into the arguement.

    Just fix your character and everything should be a little better, and thank you Insanity, much appreciated :)

    Now quit arguing SB and listen to what a RP MOD and CREATOR of the RP you're JOINING.
     
  15. King of Darkness

    King of Darkness What up Monica

    Name: Jordan Blackheart

    Age: 19

    Human or Super Human: Super Human

    Side: Shadows

    Powers: He can control any form of electricity and lightning. He can even drain the energy from any electronic around him. However, he loses his strength and power when he's far from any form of electricity. He can also convert his body heat into fire, making him able to use fire at will. He must, however, be near something that can keep his body heat up.

    Weapons: [​IMG]

    Appearance: [​IMG]

    Personality: Jordan is man of fate who believes all forms of it. He often plays games of chance and fate with others, especially his enemies. Other than that, he is very calm person who has no boiling point.

    History/Bio: Jordan doesn't WANT to kill humans, he just finds it's the only way to come to peace with them. He figures if he can kill a few hundred innocent humans with his power, people will see these super human as their superiors and will bow down to their powers and one day learn to respect them. Until then, Jordan will side with the Shadows and continue to kill any human or super human that dares to get in his way.

    Other: N/A


    'Eh, count that Knight I was thinking about out.
     
    Last edited: May 20, 2010
  16. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    XD I'm not arguing. i was just stating what I saw from my point of view and what I know I never had the mind to do. I have no problem changing some things around. Anyways, it was her biography that was the main problem so I changed it around. It should be better now.
     
  17. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    It's a little better, a whole lot of grammar errors where at some points I can't even understand what you're saying. Now to get outside this realm of girls you're in and stuff, the next two characters you make have to be guys. Plus another thing, if she was born in 1975, she would be 35, plus a bit of common sense things here, she can't be hired by government due to her parents, only be given money. Then final, read this...

    NIMH · Bipolar Disorder

    bipolar disorder doesn't cause memory lost(not lost memory like you have in your bio) Before you say something though, do the research on it.



    Anyways now that that's all take care of, guys the RP is up, it's in original, you all should check it out so it's not just Kairu and I.
     
    Last edited by a moderator: May 21, 2010
  18. RebelMurf

    RebelMurf Hero of the Wild

    Name - Kain

    Age - Currently Unknown.

    Human or Super Human - Super Human

    Side - Shadows

    Powers - Has the power to summon up faceless minions all of which are no bigger then a child. Each faceless minion possess a weapon of some sort. The more minions he summons at once the weaker they all are. A second power is currently unknown of.

    Weapon - A pistol with a few extra mags and the sword shown in the ap.

    Appearance - [​IMG]

    Personality - Kain usually keeps to himself. He is slow to trust anyone. But he seems to have taken a liking to Vince.

    History/ Bio - Not much is known about Kain's past. He was recruited into the shadows by Vincent. (Ill edit this soon with more. Just have to post in the rp).

    Other -
     
    Last edited: May 30, 2010
  19. King of Darkness

    King of Darkness What up Monica

    Huh? Oh, I never got the ACCEPTED Sticker so I thought I'd wait 'till then. Guess I'll go post.
     
  20. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Really, I thought I did, you're definately in. Now seriously people get to posting and stuff.

    Kairu accepted.
     

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