My Music.

lol an anime rap

not saying its bad, but its clearly not profesional

it goes into my tastes, and ...... well i like it ...... with a side order of rep for effort

 

The red bull line is definitely from something else But all in all a good song. I prefer your parts to your friends, because I really dislike that style of rapping (saying a line, then finishing with one word to wrap up the rhyme, "I got a perfect flow you lost your line, Amnesia")

 

I mean, I wouldn't say "guilty", as most rappers do it (drake being a HUGE example), It's just not my favorite style.

 

I like drake and Kanye well enough, but my biggest influences (I write, I don't rap) are Lupe Fiasco, Eminem, Nujabes, and Shing02

 

A.S.K. XD Ask. Oh wow. Anyways, you're a good rapper. No where near professional but at least you and your friends have a talent waiting to explode.

 

XD I was thinking 40-50% there. You might as well listen to someone's comment and think that I'm just posting just to make you feel bad. I know that you have a talent in you and I can feel it but I think that you can make that rapping go farther. I'll listen to your next three raps and I'll give you my next comment.

 

I'm here listening to your Amazin and I like it. The first link that i just got done listening to interest me. Once I listen to your second link, I'll tell you what I think of it. Right now, you and your friends in my opinion is somewhere around 70-80%.

Edit: I would rather be honest than to lie to you.

 

I listened to the Unabomber. Really didn't interest me. I net you and your friends somewhere around 50-60%. This is not to make you or your friends feel bad in anyway. All of you have good rapping voices and I think that all of you can get better.

 

He's not trying to bring you down, I feel about the same way. Talented, but unpolished. You are a good rapper, but it feels like it isn't really YOUR distinct flow, it seems a bit like you are just going along with "nigga I'm the best rappa eva Imma wreck you" style that every rapper nowadays uses. I haven't listened to all the links you've put up, but can you make a song that is less of a dis-track, and more of a story almost? Less "NIGGA I DA GREATEST", more rapping about reality? It'll give me a better gauge of your range, which is always important.

And also, EVERYONE is a better rapper than Solider Boy. (I refuse to call him "Soulja Boy Tell em")

 

Don't start getting all offended -.- It makes it irritating to give you an opinion when you decide our opinions are wrong. Don't ask for what we think if you aren't going to listen.

 

Then Rise seems a little breathy, but that can be fixed with editing. Other than that I think it's probably my favorite out of the 4 you just posted.

Love again is pretty good, more of an R&B feel to it so it's not much of a rap, plus like you said in the end it's UNGODLY short. Hit me up with the full version when it's done please!

Big Mouth needs the most editing I think, the beat is nice but the chorus sort of... drones? It seems to lack feeling/emotion

Day Dream is nice, I love the sampling of Lupe's beat here, but with Samples I prefer that you change it up a bit, you just followed his beat scheme, which is fine it's just not my preference

At some point we should collab. if you are interested. Again, I don't sing/rap, but I write and edit quite frequently.