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Indefinite Artwork

Discussion in 'Audio and Visual' started by Crossfault, Jan 17, 2010.

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  1. Jan 17, 2010 #1
    Crossfault

    Crossfault New Member

    (Flow)work:

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    c&c appreciated.

    (Flow)work:

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    (sotw5)
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    c&c appreciated.
     
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  2. Jan 17, 2010 #2
    Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    . . . . . SOMEBODY GET THIS GUY TO THE SOTW, NOW!

    I'm in love.
     
  3. Jan 17, 2010 #3
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    DX I know what you mean Moog. He made my spirit bright. WE NEED YOU!!
     
  4. Jan 17, 2010 #4
    Crossfault

    Crossfault New Member

    I've entered the fifth. We'll see how long it lasts. By the way, thank you both.
     
  5. Jan 17, 2010 #5
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

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    I'm in love with the signature that has the angel and the bow. It always catches my attention. The purple looks like darkness is trying to engulf him but his light with the light blue just push it back.
     
  6. Jan 17, 2010 #6
    Overdose

    Overdose Ninja.V

    I find your fifth too dark
     
  7. Jan 17, 2010 #7
    Crossfault

    Crossfault New Member

    I do too. The render I used was the only decent flowing one I could find, and unfortunately it was grayscale, so I had to work with it. Fortunately I think it blended very well. Thanks for your criticism, it's always welcome.
     
  8. Jan 17, 2010 #8
    Avalantos

    Avalantos Mr. Detective

    when you refer to (flow) your not commenting on the style right?
    The flow is far too destructive on all of them, colours and lighting need improvement as well.

    Keep at it though.
     
  9. Jan 17, 2010 #9
    Crossfault

    Crossfault New Member

    No, sorry for the misinterpretation, I wasn't referring to the style. Thanks for the criticism.
     
  10. Jan 17, 2010 #10
    NeRo

    NeRo Your Supreme Lord And Savior Staff Member Administrator

    Pit isnt just some " angel" bmw.

    Overall i like them. Try to make them less busy take advantage of "negative space"
     
  11. Jan 17, 2010 #11
    Kitty

    Kitty I Survived The BG Massacre Staff Member Administrator

    I think your depth/lighting is a little off. The parts that are bright look really bright to me, and the parts that are darker look really dark. And all of them have a little too much going on in the background for me.

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    This is my favorite, because I think the colors work fairly well together, and I don't feel that the effects are as overpowering as they are in some of your others. I think you may have blended the render in a little too much, though.

    Keep practicing.
     
  12. Jan 17, 2010 #12
    Crossfault

    Crossfault New Member

    Thanks for all the criticism. As for the "business", that's just my style, although I can completely see where you're coming from. I probably won't change that too much, but as for the lighting, I'll certainly work on that. More coming soon.
     
  13. Jan 18, 2010 #13
    Crossfault

    Crossfault New Member

    Well I started trying to lessen the lighting problems, but along the way something went astray, and I decided to post these anyways. Two versions:

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  14. Jan 18, 2010 #14
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    -_____- It's bwm. *Gives him a imaginary nega rep*. Pit can be counted as a angel Raiden.

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    I like the one that's not blue. I can see the lightning and that sign o his head better. You should probably use some other colors to see how it'll be affected to see the outcome.
     
  15. Jan 18, 2010 #15
    Avalantos

    Avalantos Mr. Detective

    better, flow is less destructive, if you look at the render the lighting is going from bottom right to top left, try and get the lighting of the overall sig to fit that direction. If you have trouble, there is a lighting option in the filters that can do it for you.
     
  16. Jan 18, 2010 #16
    Crossfault

    Crossfault New Member

    Thanks Avantalos, I can't believe I didn't realize that the shadows were towards the top of his head. And I'll check out that lighting option.
     
  17. Jan 18, 2010 #17
    Crossfault

    Crossfault New Member

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  18. Jan 18, 2010 #18
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    It's nice that you did a Joker signature but I really can't see your name with that dark green. It's being camouflaged into the gun.
     
  19. Jan 18, 2010 #19
    Crossfault

    Crossfault New Member

    It's actually supposed to be that way. If you look at the other sigs, they're all like that. It's my style of text.
     
  20. Jan 18, 2010 #20
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    I just realized that too. Still, I think you should have that bright spot next to his head a little bit more darker though. All in all, I think it's ok.
     
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