alche's GFX

Its kawaii, blend your render in better. Has part of sora's hair been chopped off?
The flows not quite right and your text isnt totally parallel to the key.

 

looks good its better than my work WAY BETTER

 

Please dont make seperate threads for just one piece of work.
I'm merging your threads together.

 

The first -
It screams because there's something so off here to me. That'd be sora in the center. What happens when you start meshing effects together is that you get an interesting result in making the original render lose quality. Then the text looks a bit un necessary. I'd suggest to play around with different fontfaces. Render choice for the size dimensions and particular effects also lack symmetry.

The second -
What I instantly noticed is that this piece would look much, much better without the render you used on the far right. I say this because if any, it'd look more interesting if the render was put in the center of the effects and would look as though they were slightly engulfing him.

The third -
Best one here. I'd just suggest to play up your sharpening.

MJ -
The stock looks killed with how many effects are eating him up, ITT; On his face, notice the break offs of the C4D's you've used?

When you make tags, careful not to go too buckwild with having your resources take up every section of the tag. And I'd strongly suggest to grow out of using classic C4D's.

 

It's nice, but it feels as if it needs some contrast heightened to bring out the render you used.

 

DONE. ............

 

It's actually quite pretty.
Only off aspect is the text.