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Gunsmoke Goes Boom

Discussion in 'Audio and Visual' started by NeRo, Aug 7, 2009.

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  1. NeRo

    NeRo Your Supreme Lord And Savior Staff Member Administrator

    I'll be uploaded some of my best images and some of my not so good images. I would appreciate if you guys gave me Correct Critique on these, good or bad.

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  2. Autopsy

    Autopsy #3 Nelliel Tu Oderschvank

    I dunno what you're smoking, but you should try being healthier, boy.
    Last one is where you need to be.

    Then the one before that isn't TOO bad, but you need to get out of just shoving a multitude of effects into a tag, then trying to somehow sculpt it. Your tags aren't proportional to the stock or the flow you aim to create with them.

    Change your fonts as well:
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    dah dur.

    In gen, your tags are all so twisted and scattered that there's no fluidity or consistency to them since they have SO much going on with different effects. I can see your insecurity so well, that you might as well be naked.

    Next time you make a tag, look at the stock and imagine what you want to do to it ( l o l),
    then stick to that and don't just add little random gizmos to try to save your soul.


    It aint workin.
     
  3. VentusSearcher

    VentusSearcher Steam is the only way....

    hay do u mind if i use that Zack Fair one For my sig
    it looks really cool
     
  4. Legendseeker

    Legendseeker OPON Content Writer

    axel is right. that Zack Fair one is awesome. I like the last one also
     
  5. Overdose

    Overdose Ninja.V

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    i like the color scheme, but i think the 'smexy love' should be a different color pink, maybe a much darker one. The pink found near the bottom left would do fine.

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    haha lol breasts, such a you sig Rai Rai. It also has that similar characteristic found in most of your sigs. Escence of Rai? Like a trade mark thing.

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    I like what youve done, i just dont like the render. The render makes him look fat. (weird crtitism)

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    I'm not sure what you want to be the main focus in this one, the character or the lightning.
     
  6. NeRo

    NeRo Your Supreme Lord And Savior Staff Member Administrator

    Thank you for the in depth Critique there. My favorite one is the Tira tag i'm going to make some new ones soon. Thank you all.
     
  7. Dan Glisac

    Dan Glisac New Member

    Lol sup optical justice

    anyway, all of these and most of your others seem incredibly flat and lack depth. The composition of them are decent, but all of your effects and such all come clustered together infront of the stock. See if you can migrate away from this style and pick up something else just to try it.
     
  8. NeRo

    NeRo Your Supreme Lord And Savior Staff Member Administrator


    LOL, CHA!! ya found me. Yea i need to work on my flow and blending bah i have not been making tags for at least a full year. Thanks for the help. i'll post my new work when its finished.
     
  9. Plasmos

    Plasmos Plasmos

    A nice border would do great with this sig, only with the exception of the words. The words seems kinda out of place if you know what I mean. It should blend in with the sig itself.
    The words on this piece seems like it's stuck underneath the layers a bit.
     
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  10. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

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    ^^ I'm real interested in this sig. It's real unique. I mean, him smoking I'm not into smoking, but the other colors brings in some kind of 70's style into it. The "How we do" should be a little bit darker I think for others to see.

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    I'm real curious about this sig too. Who is this warrior? What is he's fighting for? What does the yellow represents? What made you think on this sig? It's real neat. ^^

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    The usual. Zack Fair is people's favorite. What is he's looking up for? Is he's thinking about the future? What is going on through his mind? This speaks to me.

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    I wonder what made you create this sig. What series of events made him feel or look like that? Why is he's feeling so broken? The color brings out a mood of feeling like he failed. I wonder if that is fog on the right side of the sig though.
     
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