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The New Dawn 4: Attack of the Final Star

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  1. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Coldex fell to the floor, clutching his dark heart. It was pounding and sweat streamed down his back. He screamed in pain and was panting.
    "Nerezza..."
    Coldex waved his hand and summoned two unbirths in the shape of dragons.
    "Unbirth, I want you to find the location of Nerezza. DO IT QUICKLY!!!"
    He saw Celthin and Sven walk towards him.
     
  2. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Celthin looked at his father eyes widend.

    "DAD!" HE yelled. He ran over and sli down to the ground. Sven ran over. He looked around.

    "Nerazza... what happened to her? Did she say where she was going?" Sven asked Coldex. He looked at Raven and Voltier and already had an idea where.

    "The light..." He whispered. he ran out of the room and up to where JAxx was with Pandora aging her currently at age 4.

    "Jaxx, do you still have access to Destiny Island?" Sven asked her.
     
  3. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Jaxx hesitated and then shook her head "It's been exposed to light for far too long. It would be suicide for any of us to enter there especially alone. It would be a mericle of Nerazza survives the travel but hopefully 'lilly' inside of her will keep her strong enough for now. I have a plan but we'll have to use more tact then jumping into action with swords clashing."
     
  4. Destiny

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    "i have a thought as well. Coldex is dying with Nerazza and the light of Destiny Island alone then being away from Coldex I'm sure my sister is also dying. We have one of there own though, we can do a trade off perhaps at the Twilight Tower. Trade prisoners. It's the only way though." Sven told her. HE turned and looked at teh young Pandora.

    "Mommy..." She whispered.

    "Your mommy is in danger by beings of light, Pandora." Sven told her. Panddora looked upset.

    "Mommy, I want my mommy." Pandora said two wings spreading. His eyes widend though and noticed the one wing.

    "It's white..." Sven whispered and stood up.
     
  5. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Coldex held his son's hand.
    "It will be okay"
    Coldex overheard Jaxx and Sven's conversation and agreed. He had to give them Raven if Nerezza was to be given back to him.
    He messaged Siah.
    "Siah, I'll offer you a trade. Raven is in prison and Voltair is with her. I will surrender them in exchange for Nerezza"
     
  6. MrHiphy

    MrHiphy New Member

    Saki stood a little way behind Coldex. He walked up to him. "I could watch the children for you, while your gone. Unless, you insist that I come to, if they try something funny." He looked at the children. It was upsetting they had to grow up in such a strange world.
     
  7. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Siah heard Coldex's offer in her mind and considered it before a ghostly version of herself appeared in the Dark Order. *It's not really her. Just a new power she gained from Luna. She can use light to create copies of herself in the shadow but the copies are like ghosts. They can not be touched and they are almost see through* "And if we refuse?" the copy said to Coldex."

    Jaxx was the one to answer this time "Well then I think it's pretty obvious princess. Then we leave Voltiar alive but only so that he can bring back to you Raven's corpse."

    Siah glared "You cant kill her. You need her to keep Voltiar's loyalty."

    Jaxx shook her head "Our plans with Voltiar are not your concern for now young princess. Just keep in mind that if we dont get Nerazza back in one piece by the end of today then Raven will die."

    Raven appeared in the same cell as Voltiar but she seemed to be in a strange sleep.
     
  8. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Sven grinned.

    "you have 12 hours Siah." Sven stated clearly.

    "Bring back my sister, and we'll bring back your friend?" Sven stated coldly.



    Luna appeared in a ghost form. She saw Harone upset.

    "Harone, you mind joining me, we must talk." Luna said. She looked concerned and had a ghostly hand on Harone's shoulder.

    Kara came running up.

    "I heard the news, well eves dropped and foudn a spot for her." KAra said. SHe pulledu p Nerazza's body and pulled her to the secret cave and laid her in it.
     
  9. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    Voltair saw Raven't body appear. He could see a dark aura radiating from her. "That isn't good." He walked over to her. "Let's see how much darkness I can bring out." He placed his hand on her chest. The darkness in Raven's heart started flowing into Voltair. But Raven was still asleep. "Dang... I don't want to do this. But I suppose it is time I test out this ability." Voltair closed his eyes and concentrated. A ghostly figure of himself walked out of his body. It walked straight into Raven't body. Voltair entered Raven's mind.
     
  10. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Harone looked at Nerezza and then turned back to Luna. He grimaced at her.
    "OK" he said sadly, knowing he was about to recieve bad news about Lilly.

    Calder still clutched his chest. The darkness wasn't penetrating through but a mark, in the shape of a sparrow formed on his chest.
     
  11. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Siah nodded with a very melencholy expression on her face. But she knew she had no choice, they had to give Nerazza back even if she couldn't find out if she could do what she was planning "I understand. In twelve hours meet us in the center of the tower of twilight. Coldex come alone and if I sence any foul play then the deal is off and we will take Nerazza back." she said this, knowing that she was putting Raven at risk but she couldn't risk losing all of her other friends to an ambush "It's better to lose one then us all." she pointed out and then she dissapeared. She looked at Calder and explained to him the situation, "Did I do the right thing? Calder, do you think Harone will be angry with my decision?"

    Raven found herself in what seemed like a dream to her. She was alone and the light was very bright... she almost had to shield her eyes. Am I dead? she thought to herself and was startled to hear her own voice speak her thoughts from every direction. "Ok well that was creepy..." she said out loud looking around. She saw someone from the corner of her eye and looked around to see Voltiar was there too. "Voltiar? Oh thank goodness you're ok." she said as she walked over to him "Where are we? What happened to the others?"
     
  12. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    "Well..." Voltair smiled, rubbing the back of his head. "We're in your mind. Your heart was full of darkness and you're unconscience. So after I took the darkness from you and you still wouldn't wake up, I entered your mind. It is an ability I created. I'm... Sorry for you being the first person for me to actually test it on. But it seems to work. Anyways, something is going to go down. They managed to kidnap Nerazza. So a deal is going to be made. You for her. They'll be going to the middle of where the worlds meet. The Tower of Twilight. I don't know if you'll be asleep the whole time."
     
  13. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Raven glared "In my mind?" she said. She looked around but then looked back at Voltiar "So what happens to you then?" she asked, suddenly seeming to understand the urgency of the situation. SHe didn't bother to ask what happens if Siah refused the offer. She knew what was going on but ther was a more important question on her mind. Now that voltiar was considered a trator to the Dark Order, what was going to happen to him?
     
  14. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    "In all honesty, nothing really happens to me." Voltair answered. "If you get harmed at all, they all die. Over the course of these two years, I've learned so much. Knowledge that has long been forgotten. And... Well... I kinda can't die. Well, kidna isn't a good way of saying it. I can't die."
     
  15. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Raven sighed "Somehow I'm not suprised by that... I was suspicious when you stopped ageing." she pointed out. "But I mean, you joined the darkness that doesn't just go away. You wont be able to come back with us will you?"

    Jaxx shook her head as Siah dissapeared "I dont like the idea of Coldex going alone. Just because she expects no foul play from us doesn't mean she couldn't have an ambush waiting for you in the tower Coldex. They could end up killing the both of you and taking Raven back anyway."
     
  16. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    "I kind of doubt that." Sven said.

    "It all depends on if Siah is smart. Plus when the two get close they'll be stronger than all of them. They could easily take them out." Sven explained.

    "It's all though on how things are handled." Sven explained.



    Luna sat down on the dock and signaled for Harone to sit down as well.

    "There's a way to bring Lilly back and it will actually be Nerazza or I mean Lilly, you'll be able to say her name and it will be her, however tehre are some disadvantages to that. I haven't written her life past 19 meaning if she comes back she may not be in love with you and could be in love with like Symm or something. Second, her heart ay still be under the black papou curse, she'll have to go to coldex with herself that way she won't die. With thta it won't tak elong before getting taken over. Third she'l be a lot weaker since most of her light was turned to dark and when you bring her back she wil only contain light and very little making her very weak. Then final the chain event. She can be away from them, but if she is killed then Coldex and she dies, and if Coldex dies Nerazza and herself will die. You get what I mean?" Luna asked him.
     
  17. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Coldex managed to stand up. He looked at Jaxx.
    "Siah's heart is too pure. I should know. I am Calder's unbirth. I have all his memories"

    Calder looked up at Siah but as he was about to reply to her question, she disappeared.
    "I hope she'll be okay"
    He wanted to come with her but it was apart of Siah and Coldex's agreement that no one would come with her or nobody would join Coldex.
     
    Last edited: Jul 4, 2009
  18. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Siah appeared in the cave nex to Nerazza. She sighed and knelt down next to Nerazza, she just knew she could see her friend somewhere in Nerazza's eyes just before she passed out. She sighed "I have to at least try..." she whispered as she placed her hand over Nerazza's heart, using caution. She cleared her throat, drawing the light around her and also light from Kingdom Hearts and astonishingly enough, a little light that she found within Nerazza's heart. The future and past are not as written in stone as you say they are Luna... they just can't be she thought to herself before she drew in a breath and spoke out loud. "Nicole you have slept long enough. Harone needs you, the world of light needs you, and so do I and you promised to be there for us whenever and you cant break a promise." when she said Nicole's name for the first time she almost couldn't believe it. Siah's hand glowed as it rested over Nicole's and she could feel the light working it's way from Siah's heart to Nerazza. It was almost beyond Siah's control. She gasped, almost breaking her concentration as the light engulfed both of the two girls but she held on strong to the connection that she felt with her heart now unsure if it was Nerazza or Nicole that she had a connection with. "You are now your own person, Nicole. Your life is not written in stone just like anyone else."
     
  19. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Harone looked down.
    "As long as Lilly is happy..."
    A tear fell down to the ground.
    "I'm happy" he finished.
    Harone smiled grimly and turned to Luna.
    "I don't understand her connection to Coldex though..."
     
  20. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    "Hehehe that's what you think." Nerazza's voice rung.

    "SHUT UP!" nicole voice yelled through. "I had enough with you!" It yelled again.

    "I'm still in control of myself though." Nerazza said. Standing in the cave were a ghostly figure of Nerazza and one of Nicole.

    "Nicole weak and pathetic as usual I see." Nerazza said. She looked angry but then sighed and lookd down.

    "Yes you know you can't do anything." Nerazza said. Nicole looked over towards Siah.

    "Some promises are meant to be broken." Nicole said. She slowly disappeared a faint smile appeared though.
     
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